Reviews for Tanabata Jasmine
blushinglily chapter 4 . 7/27/2004
uh oh! what in the world happened? run for your life himura!
blushinglily chapter 3 . 7/27/2004
this senzo dude seems evil...very evil...well still lovin' it!
blushinglily chapter 2 . 7/27/2004
oh...i'm liking wait..i'm lovin' it! * donald's..*
blushinglily chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
hm..i like this...a lot...i'm adding you...

*clicks, favorites' list*
Dread Pirate Rinja chapter 5 . 7/27/2004
Hehe, here's my review! W00t! Wow, this is REALLY good so far! Yay, Kenshin still has some fight left in him! ... Ack! The suspense is killing me! What do they want with Kenshin? And Kaoru's involved? *grabs head* What's going on? ~_ Great work, and I'm really excited to read whatever comes next! Don't be discouraged about the reviews- the people you have reviewing you (not including me) are very talented, as are you! Keep it up! *roots for Nekotsuki*


Dread Pirate Rinja chapter 4 . 7/26/2004
Ack! I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter! This is SO good, don't undersell yourself! _ So you're Australian? That's awesome! Yeah, I usually don't mind the alternate spellings for words like "honour" or "colour"... I have friends who write with British spellings, and they're pretty similar to Australian spellings as far as I can tell. ~_ And I'm babbling.

I'm glad you liked my story, heehee... but I think I like yours better so far. ~_ To leave us here with that kind of a cliffhanger... BAH! I had a feeling that Senzo wasn't as kind as he seemed. Grr... Anyway, I look forward to reading more!


elgaladangel chapter 4 . 7/25/2004
::glares at evil shadowy men::


::waves about bokken menacingly::

Good story. VERY good story. I'm quite impressed. Please continue with this-the idea is new and your writing is excellent. And your Japanese is fine, too.
SourPinkSweetTart chapter 3 . 7/24/2004
O_O GAH! MUST HAVE MORE! SO GOOD! *drinks soda* MUAHAH! Sugar High! I hope you continue soon! *pats on back* *smiles* Good work! *huggles Kenshin plushie* YES HE IS A HOT ONE, ne? _ KAWAII! ~Queen~
SourPinkSweetTart chapter 2 . 7/24/2004
Hey! Your fic is AWESOME! You are really good! I haven't found any mistakes in your Japanese. Although I am not fluent I know a bit. The story line is awesome AND the character personalities are accurate! *pats you on back* EXELLENT! One of my favorite stories! I'm adding it to my list! Update soon please! _ ~Queen~
Shirayuki Hikari chapter 3 . 7/24/2004
Sigh. *shrugs shoulders* Fooled me didn't ya? Oh well. Now you've gotten me intrigued, so don't worry, I'll still be reading this one. _ If you wanna make it up to me, just update soon, 'kay? o
Dread Pirate Rinja chapter 2 . 7/20/2004
Hm, I think I like this so far! . Very interesting start, and I'm interested to see where you take it! I didn't notice much in terms of inappropriate use of the language, but I'm no expert. ; I really like your descriptions, and I'm extra happy that you use proper grammar and spelling! Yes! A rare find these days, unfortunately. ; Anyway, keep up the great work!


Shirayuki Hikari chapter 2 . 7/19/2004
Twelve years, huh? I'd say you're not exactly rusty! This is a wonderful story. I get kinda sick and tired of all the people who just wanna go out and off Kenshin, so having an antagonist who just wants an honorable fight is kinda refreshing. This is great, and you definitely need to keep going!
Calger chapter 2 . 7/19/2004
Interesting premise you have here, I'm definitely interested in reading more, I have the feeling there is a lot more to this than a flower and a Shinsengumi member ;) Nothing with the Japanese made me twitch. I've stopped tacking "de gozaru" to Kenshin' sentences in my writing because, now that I'm so much more familiar with Japanese, I know that that usage is wrong and even redundant when applied to an English sentence. But this is fanfiction, and I've seen much worse in other fics. Keep going, onegai! :)
sunset glow chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
Oh, this is great. What an excellent beginning. I love Kenshin's characterization and how you set things up, from Tae's opening to how he found out about the flowers.

This merchant is an interesting character, too. Can't wait to see what comes of the duel. :)
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