Reviews for Harry Potter and the Child Legilimens
Thorilian chapter 4 . 5/8
More please I loved it, Miranda is soooo cute!
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
okay this kid is cute but there is no way they would let a child adopt a child so the unrealisticness of this makes it hard to read
NoraTheeNinth chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
I am SO sorry for my review on the first chapter. It got sent without me finishing it! I am not completely used on typing on my tablet. So this is the rest of the last review:
The story she said reminded me of Fringe the story of Peter himself and the Sandman is William Joyce's creation I think since he wrote the story about the sandman who creates dreams
And did She call Harry "Harry daddy" at some point in the story or was that just a mistake when you were typing too fast?
I think Harry was a bit OC but the rest was great. I wonder what reaction will both Hermione and Ron have when they discover Harry is now a father (I think he took it a little too easily to be able to get passed of as real. I mean I think he would have had a bit of difficulties in completely realizing he now is responsible for another human being) but all in all it was great
Now my respond to the second chapter:
Hahaha! I think it was so funny and cute when Harry asked McGonnagal to leave the shades. Imagine a muggle waking by and seeing a boy calling a cat professor. The muggle would have thought Harry was mentally disturbed!
Okay, the fact that they use ligimended and ligimend in everything the ligimen people do is a bit annoying. Try and be creative. I mean even when wizards made different potions from the same plant they created three names and used them according to which potion they used it in so be creative and invent new words. I know it's hard but try. Maybe try and do something like this: when Mite read Harry's mind instead of saying she 'ligimended' him you could have gotten the word 'mind reading' or 'predicting' in another language and used it
If you need help you can PM me which ever word you need and I can write it to you in Arabic using the English alphabetic
Again, a great chapter. Slight OCness. Maybe the way to fix it is to read the books again or read other Fanfics on HP
Listen, i'm sorry i'm a little (okay, maybe a lot) harsh in my reviews. But if it was me and we were talking about something I wrote, i would have liked someone to point out the mistakes and not just send those 'luv it' and 'waiting 4 update' reviews.
If my reviews are upsetting you then please tell me and I will gladly stop it and write a shorter, nicer review on the story

Yours sincerely,
Nora
NoraTheeNinth chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
The story she said reminded me of Fringe the story of Peter himself and the Sandman is William Joyce's creation I think since he wrote the story about the sandman who creates dreams
And did She call Harry "Harry daddy" at some point in the story or was that just a mistake when you were typing too fast?
I thunk Harry as a bit OC but the rest was great. I wonder what reaction will both Hermione and Ron have when they discover Harry is now a father (I think he took it a little too easily to be able to get passed of as real. I mean I think he would have had a bit to difficulties in completly rializing
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
Can't wat for her to be inrtoduced to the weaslys.
Maybe in hogwarts she can red draco and reveal a secret
Elizabeth chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I have seen that you abandoned your story, please, complete, it I love that plot of yours
domsijohn chapter 4 . 12/7/2010
so cute i still want them out of dursleys but want more 2
domsijohn chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
want more
domsijohn chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
oh poor sev losing his son and wife
domsijohn chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
love it poor mite and i do hope that severus and harry get together
loretta537 chapter 3 . 4/29/2010
this is a great story, please update it soon
ladybugbear2 chapter 4 . 4/13/2010
this is a great story! I cant wait to read more! Some of the spellings, like Arabella and Alastor were spelled wrong, but otherwise i loved it!
Enchanted Silly chapter 4 . 3/19/2010
great story update soon please
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 3/6/2010
Totally wonderful! Maybe they can build a relationship!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
Thank you Professor! I hope someone kicks Albus' a$$et$ pretty soon!
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