Reviews for Where'd She Go?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
What you have here is good. I think though you need to take up more details around the environment and the characters, even thing we know what they look like, detail is key. I hope you get back at this even though it has been awhile. Maybe, now that time has passed, your idea with this story can develop. Don't expect much when you start out with a new project, give it time. I hope we could have actually seen what you had in mind with this story
pieeeeeee chapter 2 . 2/14/2012
i like just add more sguallie please
Silvara chapter 2 . 5/31/2007
I love it ! Continue please...
Torch-weilding Fanfic Reader chapter 2 . 7/8/2005
"Where'd She Go?" is RIGHT! Where did you go? This could be such an awesome story if you would only finish it! I was super excited about a Kingdom Hearts Aeri/Seph but since you haven't updated in so long I'm losing hope! Please don't let us down!
Suzanne chapter 2 . 6/10/2005
I really love this fic! Please continue writing it, because it's one of the few AeriSeph's I like!
Yuuna chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Awesome! Great start! Looking forward to more chapters!
charmedelflover chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Hey it is a good start to your story. Me and my friend just found it and we were wondering if you gave up on your story or are you just really slow at updates. Please do something soon or at least respond to my thing because I think your story has potential.
angel-midnight chapter 2 . 8/29/2004
i like it so far, but when are you going to bring in Sephiroth and Aerith? they are my fav coupling in FF7.
reviewer chapter 2 . 8/10/2004
wow great i guess
Kato Shingetsu chapter 2 . 8/6/2004
I LOVE this story! _ Please continue!
Roaring Flame Cat chapter 2 . 7/22/2004
Aw poor u... *huggs* I hope that made u feal better - it's a nice stor so far and I like it. I know how u feal pple all hate my single story... *I'm a better r-tist than I am a writer...* O WELL! I hpe u write more!
Ardwynna Morrigu chapter 2 . 7/21/2004
It's pretty cute, but I think you need more actual AeriSeph in here and less ChrystaRiku, since it's distracting from the stuff I'd really like to see. I'd like to write a KH AeriSeph sometime, but I have my hands full at the moment, so you got to keep at it, please, for any other KH AeriSepher out there!
The Schizophreni Trio chapter 2 . 7/21/2004
*Sniffles at the last Authoress' Note* Aww... I SHALL REVIEW! I WANT TO REVIEW! *Waves arms around frantically, on the verge of crying* This is an awesome story, don't be sad! If nobody else reviews, then tough mushrooms! They're all idiots! IDIOTS, I SAY!

Heheh.. Anyhoo, Ariseph are awesome! I've only seen one other, too, and that was a Kingdom Hearts remake of The Ring.. And yeah. I think that you're doin' well with creating another Ariseph story.. Even though Sepphy-sama hasn't shown up yet..

In short, I really liked the story. Poor Cloudie-san.. I hope you haven't given up on continuing this story, because I'd REALLY be looking forward to another chapter or two! And trust me, I've had stories that I've gotten no reviews either, so I know what it's like. Don't give up! I shall be waiting for new chapters!

Behind ya all the way! ;)

With much toasteeness (And tacos),

Terri C.
a reader chapter 2 . 7/21/2004
no no i like this! plez dont stop, ppl here r just weird.
Dino-Freak chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
Hello! it's time for another review by Dino-Freak! It's too bad no one is reading this, it's done better than most fanfics I've read on this site. Most of the stories just plain confuse me because of alot of errors in punctuation and word spelling. You did good work. One reason I think not many people have read you fic is beacause of the humongous amount of other fanfics. It's hard for me to find anything here so don't feel bad fellow author, just keep up the good works. Hope this helped!
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