Reviews for Engraved in Flesh, Written in Blood
zee . M chapter 12 . 7/18/2013
Hey buddy it's really a cool fiction...why didn't u end this...it's fantastic , plz upload the latest chapters...plz , plz ,plz
ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 13 . 2/19/2012
I love your story! _ It keeps me on the edge of my seat, excited to see what comes next.

Oh, I hope Lara finds Kurtis in time. Those cult members should start running now... Lol

The part that made me smile the most was the comment about Lara wanting to find someone who enjoyed their job. XD I don't think she notices that she enjoys her own.

Keep up the amazing work! :D
xXxCrescent MoonxXx chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
Hello, read all chapters and found your story very good! I love the way you describe all characters' feelings and perceptives! It's very deep and induces profound feelings and thoughts to the reader! Very well done on this!
Kez chapter 12 . 10/6/2007
Loved, your story. Pity it's not been updated it would have been nice to read through to the end, you had good ideas.
Tani chapter 12 . 10/11/2006
HAA! Kerrankin voin kirjoittaa kommenttia suomeksi! Luksusta. Sanoisin vain että mainion tarinan olet aikaiseksi saanut! Kerrankin jotain poikkeavaa. Kurtis-parka! Minua alkoi välillä ihan oikeasti karmia selkäpiitä..esimerkiksi ne hupputyypit. Mystistä.. Ja Laran persoonan olet myös saanut hyvin pidettyä samanlaisena kuin peleissä. Toivottavasti sitä inspiraatiota ilmaantuisi sen verran että vielä muutaman kappaleen saisi lukea lisää..
Ellethiel chapter 12 . 10/5/2006
I'm glad you updated, I mean, I really enjoy reading your story. :) I liked this chapter, and Kurtis' introspection into himself, his past and his situation. It's neat that he thinks about Lara's entrance into his life changing his own outlook on his duties as a Lux Veritatis, and it was explained nicely, I think. I mean, it wasn't glamorized how he finally came to believe that helping defeat the Cabal and Nephilim was the right thing to do. I look forward to reading the next chapters, and seeing how he gets himself out of this. Oh yeah, I liked too the part about the unseen presence and Kurtis keeping his mind closed off to it, and the other aspects of the LV use of mind reading. :)
Ellethiel chapter 11 . 6/8/2006
I am happy to be able to read this next update. I was missing your story and am glad you are still writing it. I liked this last chapter, the introspection that Lara is going through, just thinking and thinking a lot about her decisions in the last few days, and then the part where Kurtis left his body was interesting to read too, coming back that is. And the blood on the wall. I like the style of writing for this story, and the way Kurtis witnessed those three talking in the room but we the readers knew as much as he did about who he was listening to. I can't wait to see where this goes and what exactly is written on Lara's hotel room wall.
Chirugal chapter 11 . 6/6/2006
_ Told you I'd get around to reading this eventually!

I like it. :) It's kind of more of a crime drama type thing at the moment, which I think is interesting and quite unique, too.

And your descriptions are awesome as always... :) I'd be careful here and there, though, there've been a few typos. Other than that, it's wonderful.

*hugs*
Amy Lightning chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Hi,

I really love this story, I will keep reading can't wait to finish it. Your obviously a very talented author. I'm writing a fan fiction for Lara Croft at the mo, I've got some great ideas from U.
NFI chapter 11 . 6/1/2006
Oh... a mystery! Please continue!
theharshlightofday chapter 11 . 5/31/2006
Ooh, evil cliffhanger :p

I totally loved this uppie and, as I said before, I particularly liked this sentence: 'Her sudden appearance startled the closest officer, who fumbled with his cup of morning coffee, lost the fight and helplessly watched as the porcelain proved to be weaker than the floor.'

There are tons of other sentences I could pick up on, but overall, I'll just say your writing is really deep, and that you are really creating a well-rounded sense of mystery and suspense. And I loved the running joke of the coffee, and Lara's patronising manner with Stravsky _

Please update soon! :)

Linzi xx
Tombraider252 chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
What an opening!

Ive been meaning to read this for ages... and now i am going to. ;-)

You can count me officially hooked!
Jordy chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Well hello! About time I left you a review, since I have been following this for ages...

First thing, I think you're doing extremely well to write all of this in English...it's one thing to be able express yourself fluently in an every day in another language, quite another to be able to write well creatively, yet you've pulled it off and there are really very few mistakes.

Although this chapter is short, I already like the way you characterise Lara, as someone who won't put up with any nonsense...

Also, it's a clever way to start the fic, as it avoids beginning with the usual "Lara collecting the Chirugai" scene..not that there's anything wrong with that, but we don't need any more fics starting that way at this point. See you in chapter 2!
Mutinous Phantom chapter 10 . 5/2/2006
Cool story :) I look forward to an update :)
theharshlightofday chapter 10 . 5/1/2006
Damn, this was a good chapter. Short and sweet. You blew me away again with your description of Kurtis' mind returning to his body. Then my mouth fell to the floor when Divinity killed the guard.

'Selfish prick' I loved that bit XD You've got Kurtis completely in character.

Please write more soon! This fic is really beautifully written and original, and it's a shame you're becoming discouraged with it. Hopefully others will come to their senses soon, but for now I'm sitting here, quietly enjoying it :)

Linzi
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