Reviews for A New Adversary
MassiveSinger chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I guess they will have bitten off more than they can chew. Goodness..
Tewi chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
ooky, i expected something different but great job! i like it!
Sapphire93 chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
I can't wait until the second chapter! Keep going!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2004
Dang your so good at this!#!
Lady-Christian-Knight-88 chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
LOL! Loved it! So much tension, so much buildup...and then...it's a PIZZA! LOL!

Loved this story! Really! Just what I needed after my emotional roller-coaster of a day.
DemonFox38 chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
. They're going to need Prilosec and/or Pepcid AC after that one. Good twist! :D
Pretender Fanatic chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
*lets out a blood chilling scream* dun! dun! dun! dun! Hehe cute! I love those little one shotters! Don was right... They'll never go back to normal pizza again! lol nice! Hope see another one soon!

Pretender Fanatic
prepare4trouble chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Hilarious! Not much else I can say, but its really, really funny!
Reinbeauchaser chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
Loved it! Quite cute all the way around...funny, too, the way you've set it all up.

Yep, a keeper!

Be blessed.
Whitewolf89 chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
God, this is hilarious! Here I thought their "New Adversary" was gonna be a flesh-and-blodd enemy, and it turns out to be a monster-sized pizza! VERY cool, you sneaky thing, you!

LOL Bet they'll be nursing monster-sized belly-aches before their done! ;)