Interesting. Some how what Dosselmeyer said about the goose's feather is alike to that of the swan's has me thinking.

wow!

these chapters/episodes are sure long!

- it's really good tho!

keep going!

It's a little confusing near the end of this chapter though, where the flashback ends, but it's still really good all the same!

I hope you do more!

Everything else is perfect baecause it seems just like it would in the series!

Your writing is wonderful. Each "episode" is structured like the original series; cutting to the different characters and being able to read thier thoughts. Everything, and I do mean everything matches the series. The mood, the humor, the plot, the characteration, even small details are canon.

You don't draw out the back story of Caras as much as the series did with Rue, however this works better for a story in written form. I also enjoy how you are going to let your new characters evolve and show the readers more sides of thier personality. For example, right now Truthos is not as dynamic as you have hinted in the story.

The way you write the original characters is excellent. Rue and Mytho particularly impress me since these charcters were not as developed as Ahiru and Fakir at the series end. Rue is still Rue and has not become pure sugar and vanilla cream with love. Mytho...reading your work I accepted how you wrote him. It is only now that I realize just how little the audience know of him at the end of the last chapter.

The balance of the humorous and serious elements are very well done and like the series itself I'm sure it will darken as your epic progresses. The foreshadowing is not too little or too overbearing...keep it up. You also have a wonderful sense of pace.

Considering everything that happens in each of your episodes I'm not quite sure it would fit into 25 mins on screen. That is not a complaint.

I'll stop before I write a book myself. Suffice it to say there are many touches that show how much you have worked on this story. From the music to the ballet the research you've done is impressive.

PLZ UPDATE SOON!11!1!ONE!

Plz,Plz update soon. Am dying to read the rest.:D

AAh...soo good must read more

Oh, I really like this fic of yours; it reminds me a lot of the original Princess Tutu series. I'm glad you kept it in the same style!

Ah, will we get to see more Fakir and Ahiru moments? Those really deserve to be together and find some happiness, although I'm glad Ahiru's back to being a human!

I liked the idea of the Caras retrieving pieces of his heart.. fits into the plot perfectly. Please keep it up!

This is a nice Princess Tutu fic... There wasn't much Ahiru in the last chapter though... Anyway...

Why don't you put this fic in the Princess Tutu category?

Well, your next episode preview made me want to know what will happen as much as the real ones in the series, and it's not a small matter. :-)

I like this story. It really looks like a real Princess Tutu episode. Your original characters are cool. Especially Komaro and - I don't know why - Sagi. I already love them. I like less Trutho, but since it wasn't just an episode character, I hope he'll have time to become more interesting (it's a heavy burden to be Mytho's brother, and we can hope a lot from him. I dont' want to be like Drosselmeyer, but I hope he'll have good tragic parts.)

I was sad Mytho didn't tell immediately the truth to Rue. I love the part with the little feathers and Uzura. I love also Ahiru teaching Trutho how to dance.

The storyline seems very interesting. The way you write ir like a real episode - with pregenerics, musics, previews, use of German, etc... makes us believe even more it's the real sequel of the series. But it must be very difficult to do!

We can't write stories that become the truth. But you can write a fic that becomes as much the truth as the real "Princess Tutu" is to me, and it's impressing. I hope it will not be an unfinished story, though. Unfinished story are a tragic thing. ;-)

OMG, I want to see this updated to badly! Please update soon I don't think I can wait for the next chapter. This actually seems like it could be in an episdoe of Princess Tutu, I'm ver happy that stumbled on it.

~Kat-chan_

WAH! I luv dis story? Are you discontinuing itr?

Hi! This story seems a bit different from the last time I read it, but maybe I'm just remembering wrong...

At any rate, I really like the idea of Ahiru still being able to communicate using the dance gestures she learned as a human. Clever idea.

Interesting backstory to explain where Trutho came from, as well as explain how the war between Mytho and the Monster Raven first started. I'm confused about something, though - are Kinkan and Ginkan different places, or the same?

Good job with the dialogue. It came off very natural, and there were some good one-liners in there.

The only criticism I'd make is the dance scene - you describe all of Rue's movement's in great detail, but it's honestly a bit dry to read, and it didn't really keep my attention. I don't know if there's a better way to present it...?

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

~MM~

that's very interesting... so what will happen to the prince? and will ahiru go back to being a girl? and what's with drosselmeyer and the feathers? update soon please _

Hello! I found the link to this story from the Tutufic LJ community. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm enjoying it. I will get back to you with amore detailed review once I've finished reading the whole thing.

The only suggestion I would make is in regards to the BGM. While I understand that a lot of thought went into picking the selections, it's a little jarring to be reading and then come across thename of a song in brackets right in the middle - it kind of breaks up the flow of the story. Maybe if you could just list the selections at the beginning or end of each chapter...?

~MM~