Reviews for Princess Tutu: Chapter of the Bird |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Uwa... and it only gets better...! I can't wait to see how the feathers come into play~! The scene with Ahiru teaching Trutho to dance is so cute! Hehehehe. Ano... granted, I haven't seen most of the second season... but is Rue a bit out of character? She seems to be a bit *too* harsh. She always struck me as being rather sweet- even if she resists being sweet in favor of making a respectable stage presence. I dunno. Update soon! Happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O I want more... this is so well-written. Keep up the good work! Rue is suspicious~... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! *applause* Probably the most complex and promising story in the fandom yet. I especially love the attention you paid to the formatting of the story. I can't remember who Komaro was, however; is he an original character? (Meh, I need to rewatch Ptutu. It's been too long.) Be careful not to get too technical with the ballet terminology, however; it does show a great attention to detail, but not everyone is a ballet dancer. (I finished Ballet I and gave up.) I unfortunately got a little lost during the pas de deux and had to reread a few sentences more than once. Other than that . . . this story is quite wonderful, and I hope that you can write some more quickly. |