Reviews for Aftermath: Loss and Redemption 2
Wonderbee31 chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
Okay, this was another great story so far. I don't often see that many aftermath fics, so this one is a welcome surprise. The characters are still spot on, and your writings about pregnancy is pretty close as well. I enjoyed the Naru/Tsuroku confrontation in this chapter, though it was neccessary for Naru. Like a lot of anime females, even when she's in love, she can't admit her feelings or the other guy, and that was her downfall. It's a shame, but what's the saying, you snooze, you lose. I enjoyed the Ke/Mo interaction, and look forward to more, as well as Motoko's reaction to Tama-chan. I do hope that there'll be a happy ending for the couple.
Innortal chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
Don't worry, this chapter came out splendidly. Your vocabulary helped keep the story progressing well, as well as redrew the reader back into it. I had almost forgotten about this story, and was glad to see that the Kitsune dynamic was included, opening up the possibilities of why she truly acted the way she did when Keitaro and Motoko returned.

I honestly look forward to the next chapter, as well as hope to see future updates at the faster pace, but I understand how other responsibilities can interfere with writing.

Good luck.

ApocalypticPOTATO chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
: D

That's all i can bring myself to say.

This story is always the highlight of my day, and your updates are like the highlight of my months. Take as long as you need, it's worth every minute.

...I love you man...
atlantis-rob chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
No worries Hawker on the delay, I love this tale and so it's always worth the wait. Great job on the whole range covered, the talk between Tsu and Naru was great and very well donen and their slight after discussion was right on. Great way to work Mitsumi in also. Maybe I'll swing over to aff tonight if I have . keep up the great work!
dennisud2015 chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
Hey good continuance and still IC for most i see. Good that Naru's realized her situation and responcibility and i do hope she stays friends with them.

Finally it should be a fun and chaotic 7 1/2 months as Motoko goes through her pregnancy. Hope Kei's up to it emotionally AND physically!

sub-sarissa chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
hey man, nice chapter (once again). thoroughly enjoyable. haha, The Voice - that was great.

thanks for the update. and hope u get the other ones up soon. but yeah moving does suck. goodluck with future updates : )

shadexxx chapter 1 . 10/23/2004

Read the first story, and was absolutely thrilled by it. Glad that you have decided to write a sequel. Please continue:-)
ExtinctionSystem chapter 2 . 10/8/2004
Please continue this soon, but no rush.
Random1377 chapter 2 . 9/28/2004
First off, anyone looking to fanfiction for advice on pregnancy almost deserves what they get... though from what I've read, you're pretty spot-on for how things go - especially the mood swings :P Another excellent chapter. FINISH HIM! Ahh, for the old Mortal Kombat days. I must admit though, I don't know what at tanto is. I just keep having visions of either a knife... or an Indian sticking out of the door. heh. I have to admit the little scene of Kitsune and Keitarou was pretty nicely played - especially the line about it being a mistake. Man, if there's one thing you don't say to an expectant parent... can you imagine what would have happened if it was Motoko she said it to? Yikes! I guess, to sum it up... I dig it.

Uldihaa chapter 2 . 9/26/2004
Boy I feel kinda silly...after reading and reviewing the original fic and asking for a sequal I up and find that your were, in fact, writing one...*ahem* Oopps :) Now on to the review!

I'm really pleased that the tone and believablity of the characters remains as good as the first fic. The way Naru and Kitsune still feel quite angry at Keitaru and Motoko is very true to their personalities. You might want to inject a little more humor (not really comedy) back into the story, similar to the way the original was writen. Other than that, I'm both greatly enjoying this fic and eagerly aniticipating the next one!
Fagor chapter 2 . 9/24/2004
A pregnant pause is what again?

Good job, but I think you missed on the Spider-Man disclaimer. And also that pregnant woman actually search for tips on fanfic. Oy.
atlantis-rob chapter 2 . 9/16/2004
Sorry it's taken me a while to review but I was moving this last week or so, and away the weekend before that.

Great chapter, lots of great LH style dialogue and the fight setup and scene were well done. The dr's visit was well handled and the last scene definetly was typical of one of those rare deep LH moments, that are very cool. Great work! Can't wait for more!
magnilan chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
Read both one and two. HOO-rah! Great concept, keep it up. If possible, keep the story going until their daughter grows up and fall in love.

Good luck!
shinji the good sharer chapter 2 . 9/14/2004
haha, that "i understand you're expecting your first child" joke was good. anyways keep it up.

ikari shinji
sub-sarissa chapter 2 . 9/14/2004
nice chapter, mate. keep it up. and i know i'm asking too much, but on behalf of everyone out there who has read your story:


- just a request from (i'm assuming your whole audience and...)

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