Reviews for Aftermath: Loss and Redemption 2
gangrel chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
Best ever.

Cant wait until the sequel and i hope its gonna be as good as this one.

(sorry for my bad english im from sweden)
Z3R0Destroyer chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
I love your Love Hina fics. I really hope you continue this story. And what are they going to Name there kid? Please continue, I'm hear to prof read some chapters if you want.
Random1377 chapter 3 . 2/4/2005
Ok, so, it only took me 3 months to review. It's hard when you normally read up at work, and you know there might be a risk of some lime slipping in, ya know? Anyway, I liked this chapter. Kind of felt like a calm before the storm kind of setup... one last nice dinner and evening together before all hell breaks loose. I especially liked the description of Motoko's dress. You should see if you can get a fanartist to draw it up. heh.

PenName Valid chapter 3 . 12/20/2004
zero fan chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
You! I knew I saw this fic somewhere else! I now remember it being on ! By the way one of the best Motoko/Keitaro fics I've ever read (More like the best evah!) Or romance fic int the anime category! Keep up the good work!
Harvey Bautista chapter 3 . 11/19/2004
Um... I know it isn't the sleep deprivation, but damn, I had problems understanding this one.

By the way buddy, I've finally graduated from Charlie-35th... I'm now a part of the Army Corps of Engineers... woot!

I should arrive in Oakland around tennish (Cali time) on Saturday. From there, after some recuperation, I can probably begin brainstorming my attack -erm, I mean, my approach- on extending your project.

PV2 Bautista

U.S. Army
Wonderbee31 chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
Okay, this was another great story so far. I don't often see that many aftermath fics, so this one is a welcome surprise. The characters are still spot on, and your writings about pregnancy is pretty close as well. I enjoyed the Naru/Tsuroku confrontation in this chapter, though it was neccessary for Naru. Like a lot of anime females, even when she's in love, she can't admit her feelings or the other guy, and that was her downfall. It's a shame, but what's the saying, you snooze, you lose. I enjoyed the Ke/Mo interaction, and look forward to more, as well as Motoko's reaction to Tama-chan. I do hope that there'll be a happy ending for the couple.
Innortal chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
Don't worry, this chapter came out splendidly. Your vocabulary helped keep the story progressing well, as well as redrew the reader back into it. I had almost forgotten about this story, and was glad to see that the Kitsune dynamic was included, opening up the possibilities of why she truly acted the way she did when Keitaro and Motoko returned.

I honestly look forward to the next chapter, as well as hope to see future updates at the faster pace, but I understand how other responsibilities can interfere with writing.

Good luck.

ApocalypticPOTATO chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
: D

That's all i can bring myself to say.

This story is always the highlight of my day, and your updates are like the highlight of my months. Take as long as you need, it's worth every minute.

...I love you man...
atlantis-rob chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
No worries Hawker on the delay, I love this tale and so it's always worth the wait. Great job on the whole range covered, the talk between Tsu and Naru was great and very well donen and their slight after discussion was right on. Great way to work Mitsumi in also. Maybe I'll swing over to aff tonight if I have . keep up the great work!
dennisud2015 chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
Hey good continuance and still IC for most i see. Good that Naru's realized her situation and responcibility and i do hope she stays friends with them.

Finally it should be a fun and chaotic 7 1/2 months as Motoko goes through her pregnancy. Hope Kei's up to it emotionally AND physically!

sub-sarissa chapter 3 . 11/15/2004
hey man, nice chapter (once again). thoroughly enjoyable. haha, The Voice - that was great.

thanks for the update. and hope u get the other ones up soon. but yeah moving does suck. goodluck with future updates : )

shadexxx chapter 1 . 10/23/2004

Read the first story, and was absolutely thrilled by it. Glad that you have decided to write a sequel. Please continue:-)
ExtinctionSystem chapter 2 . 10/8/2004
Please continue this soon, but no rush.
Random1377 chapter 2 . 9/28/2004
First off, anyone looking to fanfiction for advice on pregnancy almost deserves what they get... though from what I've read, you're pretty spot-on for how things go - especially the mood swings :P Another excellent chapter. FINISH HIM! Ahh, for the old Mortal Kombat days. I must admit though, I don't know what at tanto is. I just keep having visions of either a knife... or an Indian sticking out of the door. heh. I have to admit the little scene of Kitsune and Keitarou was pretty nicely played - especially the line about it being a mistake. Man, if there's one thing you don't say to an expectant parent... can you imagine what would have happened if it was Motoko she said it to? Yikes! I guess, to sum it up... I dig it.

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