Reviews for All the Small Things |
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John Trevelyan chapter 4 . 4/5/2024 I rather expected Ranma to be Sailor Nemesis. How? Simple, really. In Greek mythology, Nemesis was the Goddess of Divine Retribution. And if there's one thing Ranma is REALLY GOOD AT, it's dishing out retribution. How else do you think he survived Akane's malletings? |
John Trevelyan chapter 3 . 4/5/2024 I kind of figured that Haruka would automatically assume the worst when it comes to Ranma. In fact, I see her as the Akane of Sailor Moon, always jumping to the wrong conclusions. |
John Trevelyan chapter 2 . 4/5/2024 IF you think YOU are scum, you haven't met my LITTLE BROTHER JAKE KORVING yet. Oh, sorry, did I say "little"? My mistake. Well, HIS really. He didn't FOLLOW THE RULES FOR LITTLE BROTHERS, and SHOT UP TO SIX FEET ONE INCH! |
Wharpt chapter 12 . 8/2/2023 It's now been seven years. Is this a dead story now? |
caffeineandshiny chapter 10 . 6/21/2020 You should definitely post those last two chapters that you planned! A year hiatus is nothing! NOTHING I tell you! I would seriously love to read an ending to this story, hopefully before 2026. But I will keep an eye out for as long as it takes. Ja ne! |
Fanfiction Newbi chapter 12 . 5/13/2020 Fun story. Please don't let it join the pile of unfinished stories that only have a few chapters left. I hope that you are doing well and wish you Luck. |
Lukkai chapter 11 . 3/19/2020 Slight problem I see in this chapter that I feel I should point out: The advance placing of the bomb is not possible that way. The sniper had no way to know in advance on what roof exactly they would stop to rest. Nor which way they would evacuate in case he missed his shot (which from how it is presented in the story was actually meant for Usagi, not Makoto). And the time needed to place that amount of explosives safely and efficiently is quite substantial. Hence why that particular scene just does not work as presented. |
fangs of death chapter 12 . 9/2/2018 really food story. |
Guest chapter 12 . 12/29/2017 You still owe us the happy ending Slacker...get to it before we bring out the puppy eyes stare |
caffeineandshiny chapter 12 . 8/25/2017 Hey GRRM you finally decided to give us another glimpse into your world! Haha, nice to see another chapter, I always did enjoy this story and I'm glad to see you continue it after all this time. This chapter felt a bit rushed but otherwise it was an interesting read. I would like to see Ranma be more of a badass, it kinda feels like the other Senshi (especially Saturn) have started to catch up to him too quickly, despite the fact that Ranma is supposed to be a prodigy AND has undergone even more intensive training than they have (both in his previous life, and in this one). I would like to see Ranma be able to do things even Setsuna can't, but I understand if you feel like that would be too close to wish-fulfillment in your story. Looking for more within the next decade! ;) |
Chaosbringer01 chapter 12 . 7/19/2017 So glad to see this story updated. PLEASE keep your promise and finish this, it brings back suck pleasant memories to the glory days of Ranma fics |
Rorschach's Blot chapter 12 . 11/2/2016 Wow. Never expected to see an update from this ever again. Thanks for taking me back to the golden age of Ranma fiction, brought back a lot of memories. Nice work with the chapter too. Good luck. |
Shannon Dee chapter 12 . 10/21/2016 Great to see you back! |
Look what Jesus did chapter 12 . 10/20/2016 You know I hadn't looked at this fic for about 4 years and yet last week I started reading through it again. I must have missed the new chapter by a day, talk about weird coincidences. Anyways loved the latest addition to this old classic and hope I don't have to wait another decade for the rest |
Ranmaleopard chapter 12 . 10/16/2016 My god this is just really awesome as always I eagerly await your next enjoyable chapter. Please continue |