Reviews for In My Own Time
Trillian42 chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Very sweet story. Like the other reviews said, need editing but very nicely done. I know I'm living in the past (you published, what, a year ago?) but I think it's a caring story. Poor Danny... excellent work, expecailly for your first fic.
kazechyme chapter 1 . 9/26/2004
I could almost feel all the emotions that Daniel was going through. It's so sad that Janet's gone... I think you did a great job with it though.
Sam Carter O'Neill chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
*tear*

Great story!

1 quick word of advice: get someone to proof-read your work because you've made a few minor grammatical errors and you said "apothis" instead of apophis! Lol, but great job: you really captured the characters!

-EllA