Reviews for Undiscovered
CoolGuyWithMask chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
OMG!U must write more for this one.
Marron Babe chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
Well first off, I just love that song! It is like one of my favorites of Ashlee Simpson's! So, I have to give you credit for that. The fic was sweet and sensitive as well. The only problem I had, (and please don't take this as me bashing you or anything, I'm just offering polite criticism)was that the song and the story just really didn't fit together. The song is really sad and desperate while this fic wasn't too angsty or dramatic as the song is. Next time I think you should consider the song's lyrics a little bit more before placing a story to it. Laters ;)
Suaru chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Your brilliant! I love all of your song-fics (well all the ones I've read so far).
Kira Granger chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
Aw... thats so sweet! I never really imagined Inuyasha would be that soft but oh well, the story was cute