|Reviews for The Boot is on the Other Foot|
| Raina chapter 7 . 1/22
You should update this its great!
| Swallow-Tailed Kite chapter 7 . 5/29/2011
overall, good story, just punctuations need to be improved a bit
| Swallow-Tailed Kite chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
punctuation "-.- "._.
| DemonicDragoness chapter 5 . 4/16/2006
Lucky Marcus I guess. I love this story!
| Angel1432 chapter 5 . 4/1/2006
I'm guessing you watche(d) Babylon 5.
I really like the story. Keep it comming.
| Anywien chapter 2 . 8/1/2004
hi me again
nice chapter, but might i suggest not squishing all the dialog and actions together. for instance instead of writing it like this "hello" "hi to you to! how are you doing today?" "fine how about you?"
you could write it like this:
"hi to you too! how are you doing today?"
"fine, how about you?"
see? it just makes it easier to read...
other than that, good job!
| queen-of-sapphires chapter 1 . 7/25/2004
i really liked it, but i think that the curse works more where the person has o think about doing it, it doesnt just happen automatically. Like in the book where ella goes off to finishing school she says that she was constantly thinking of all the orders and concentrating on them the whole time.
| Anywien chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
great job redoing it! umn i just want to add that maybe u shouldn't do all the convo and stuff all squised together so it's all like one big paragraph kuz it's hard to read and see where you are in the paragraph.. but besides that... it's ver good!