Naruto shorter than Sasuke at sixteen? ugh probably going dmfor Narusasuain't there enough of those in the world

(0_0) What were Sakon and Sasuke doing? Details are required

Honestly, as I was reading your story I kept asking myself why I should care about your POVs? What is the point of them? In my opinion, a lot of what you wrote wasn't necessary to the story. The parts I read I did enjoy. I skimmed most of it and I hate doing that because you worked hard on your story.

I wish you didn't have so many POVs. I feel like that made your story slow. Like really slow. A third of the way through I started to skip everyone's POV but Naruto's. Your first chapters were difficult to separate from the actual story and your notes/comments.

"Demon-possessed and short". Good criteria for partnering up, I suppose. XD
And it is pretty logical for the pair of them to be short - one from malnourishment and one from insomnia. Barring pulling the "demonic interference" card of bullshit, that is.

Damn... love this story. Where's the rest tho?

Omg, ninja insurance... ahahaha, that killed me

Aaaaaaaaaaaa
...sigh...this was a good story...
Thanks for writting
Motherofthehorde

Ah, well, this was fun while it lasted. Such an interesting story with lots of stuff made up because there wasn't a canon explanation yet (I think, considering the date) made it pretty original. I especially liked Sasuke and Sakon's... friendship? Friendship. Probably. But the characterizations of all the characters was interesting. Such as Gaara being still kinda (a lot) creepy but also caring in his own way, Naruto being rather disillusioned by life but still making the best of it, Itachi actually being a mass murderer instead on a secret Konoha mission...
You mentioned on your profile that while this fic is dead, you're willing to share how it was supposed to end. Does this offer still stand? I'm quite curious, even if also worried because I like happy endings but this is clearly not a story with the likelihood of it. Could you maybe tell me, please? :)

Gah. So many untied ends. Sugar coated evil lol. I actually like the fic name and your original characters. I really didn't want Kishio to die, and felt so bad for him that he had to witness how little the Raikage cared before he died, that his loyalty was one way and it feels like their village's belief in their Raikage was ill-placed. I'm on Gaara's side since I'm of the mentality of raze the whole place to the ground for hurting Naruto party, I'm sad that Naruto hates Gaara for what he did and angry and that Naruto took on the bond without learning more about it and so treats it like an insignificant thing. What Gaara feels for Naruto is deep. I want to see the Sakon and Sasuke interactions continue. Mentorship ftw because seriously Sasuke, you're an heir so you need to learn manners and protocols and what not :D I super like your portrayal of Orochimaru as a proper kage doing paperwork and such to maintain a village and all that. This is the second fic I've read that makes me want to live in Sound. Thanks for writing.

I hope Gaara and Naruto work things out. For better or worse they are partners, and that means something.

WEll, I personally would at least like to know what happens with Naruto and Gaara. Do they ever reconcile? I find it hard to believe Naruto could ever believe his own self-worth outweighs that of an entire village of people.

I loved the part where Naruto tried to distract Gaara.

Dang, what a place to abandon a story. I was really enjoying this, too. It's got a good balance of humor and drama. Sakon, Gaara, and Kisame especially just seem to automatically lead to funny dialogue.

A cliffhanger? You let the fic die on a cliffhanger? Dangit! Now I have to keep it on my watchlist just in case you ever update it! .