Reviews for Together
Burninghammer63088 chapter 8 . 1/6

A great ending to an entertaining and captivating Story. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Mate.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 5 . 1/3
That... Went better than I anticipated... :D

Another good chapter. Thanks again for sharing.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 4 . 1/3
Oooh boy...

That was a sudden twist... Talk about going in unarmed for a change. :D Again. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 3 . 1/3
Who needs Daxter when you have an inner monologue. :D

Great two chapters, again, I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's definitely slightly smutty (a Feeney weensey bit) But tasteful. Nice work so far. Cheers for sharing.

Dan F
Burninghammer63088 chapter 1 . 1/3
Good start mate. I found it well written, And a cute start. About to read chapter two. I'm enjoying. It already.

Dan F
DarkEcoFreak chapter 8 . 1/14/2013
Wow that was… AMAZING! I'm so happy that he lived! I REALLY LOVED THIS!
JxK DxT TxA chapter 8 . 4/2/2010
Oh and like method man said; 6 out of 5 for no yaoi.
JxK DxT TxA chapter 8 . 4/2/2010
That was so good. The parts when Keira refuses to marry Jak and when the baby died and came back to life really surprised me. The ending was so sweet too. I loved it.
o-o chapter 8 . 4/20/2008
omg...this was a beautiful story...awsome job :D
longearsdude chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
this story is definetly one of the better jak\keira romances, bravo.
Toxic-Tears-123 chapter 8 . 5/3/2007
Great story plz right some more stories they're really good
T D chapter 8 . 3/7/2007
Nice fanfic, but in the end you coulda put that Jak used Light eco AND green eco to save Damas cos that ties in more with the game with green for healing.
bob chapter 8 . 4/22/2006
thats swell
R.A. Pointless chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
okay, before I read the rest I would just like to say that Samos didn't react at all like I thought he was going to...
GirlNextDoor228 chapter 8 . 3/14/2006
I'm glad I didn't review before..I'm a bit allergic to *atchoo* hairy just kidding...

Wait, no I mean *atchoo* GET OFF ME HAIR-*atchoo*

lol thanks

Now...where was I...oh yes...I loved this story...REALLY LOVE IT LOVE IT IT'S AWESOME *atchoo*

ops I must get on my *atchoo* way


Great job ;)
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