|Reviews for Race Against Time|
| Strawberry chapter 14 . 4/5
Poor elf- asthma sucks
| C. Rinkuki Takato chapter 36 . 2/21
You laugh a tad too much that I feel disturbed. NOT!
I actually liked reading how you'd draw out Legolas' sufferings. Damn, these are GOOD...
| C. Rinkuki Takato chapter 21 . 2/20
I've read a couple of your stories and only reviewed to say this: my good friend, you are a sadist. No worries, though, I'm just like you, but I tend to contradict myself (i.e. I want Legolas to suffer, but I'd kill anyone else who did it to him; not including you, of course)
| LittleMissCook05 chapter 36 . 8/9/2016
OMG! I just want to say, thank you for spending your time making this story for the world to see! I literally read the whole thing for 9 hours straight with only a 30 min break! I was so engrossed in it I just couldn't stop! By the way, I am so glad it turned out to be a beautiful, happy ending. I really thought that Legolas was going to die! Thank you again!
All the best for the future,
| Whirlwind421 chapter 2 . 5/12/2016
You turned him into a human! Am I close?
| Legolas's heart and soul chapter 36 . 3/4/2016
Yes! He's cured! I'm dancing around shouting and laughing, because I really love Legolas. Ooops, it's one in the morning, and my sister is awake now. I should run, my sister is not a morning person. But I'm still so happy! He's awake and alive! By the way, awake and alive by skillet is a good song, the lyrics of which really fit this.
| Loki Joker Quinn Jr chapter 9 . 1/25/2016
Ahaaha I have one as I'm reading this lol
| StarlightGilgalad chapter 36 . 12/28/2015
Aww! Loved it! Very well written and I felt so sorry for Legolas the whole time. Every time something else happened to him I was all like "oh not another thing!" :) thanks for writing this! I dearly enjoyed it!
| Sfumina chapter 27 . 11/11/2015
Hi. I've just finished ch 27 and i've felt like reviewing. Well... You truly are an elf-torturer, and I love it. You described in such details Legolas' illness, writing about every cough, every shudder, every pretending-i'm-fine that i could really see him struggling in front of me. I usually prefer more fighting enemies and more physical confrontations but this is still ok... With this ff you made me imagine being Legolas laying in bed surrounded by Aragorn, Thranduil and Elrond and that's a pretty (hot) nice scene. So far so good. Hope the elf's gonna regain some strength and beats someone up. But i'm afraid he's not going to be much stronger... I'll shall now continue reading! (Sorry for bad grammar, eng's not my native language)
| Captain Annie chapter 17 . 11/10/2015
This has to be the best Lord Of The Rings fan fiction I've read. Your accuracy related to medical care is amazing! For example, hitting someone's back to drain liquid form the lungs. I think the hidden message is we don't think about how a cold is quite dangerous to some (very old or young, and apparently elves, especially if they have asthma!)
I like how you worked in funny moments like: "The sudden sound of two people running up the stairs would've been humorous had the circumstances been different."
You also are good at capturing emotions: Thranduil"s fear, Elrond's worry while he appears outwardly calm (well most of the time), and Legolas and Aragorn's friendship.
| indigoblueoO chapter 14 . 9/9/2015
I had an asthma attack 10 minutes before reading chapter 14 xD
| The-True-Power-Ranger chapter 36 . 9/2/2015
I was reading all this whole story, including all the chapters where legolas is in so much pain, at the same time my sister was playing Say Something on the piano, and I literally started crying!
| Nimblelf legolas chapter 36 . 7/23/2015
Sniff sniff...it was a beautiful story...their friendship is so realistic and touching :) I am soo sad its finished.:( I love the way you potrayed Legolas and Aragorn...they have so much brotherly love for each other and yet they also know how to have fun:) I really love how you potrayed Thranduil and Elrond...Thranduil is so loving and caring and would do anything for Legolas but yet he is very wise. And Elrond is very like the one in the book in the sense that he is caring and very wise too. I love the relationship between Elrond and Thranduil they seem like old time friends...basically I love everything about this wonderfully touching and adventurous story and the way you potrayed every character and their relationship between one another...it is definitely something I would recommend to my sister who is also a huge lotr fan like me :)
| LegolaslovesME chapter 22 . 7/12/2015
Legolas... Oh my lover... Still so strong, even when wounded. Out of empathy, my cold has started again. You have some powerful writing!
| LegolaslovesME chapter 9 . 7/12/2015
My sister just got a migraine, and she couldn't see, she was vomiting, her head felt like a bunch of uru-Kai were pounding inside it, every little touch, sound and light hurt her and it felt like the world was prying her head open, so she told me. We had to keep her in a quiet dark room for awhile day, on medication, with a bucket. Now, to see your sister like that hurts, but to see your lover like that is nearly unbearable. So, since i am good with a sword, you will stop this NOW. YOU. DO. NOT. HURT. MY. HUSBAND. LIKE. THIS. Please. Just please.(starts to sob and touches scabbed lips, scabbed from using true love's kiss until they bled)