Reviews for Ja ne
rii chapter 3 . 11/12/2005
Your story's quite good. Excepting the grammatical and the "Knightess" errors (though I believe that is a common mistake ). It's kinda short but still nice. And about that "something to think about in the flashbacks", is it because the 2nd-to-last one was the only one in italics? Hope you improve and go on to write a few more Ragnarok fics..
Tenshi no Hana-chan chapter 3 . 11/5/2004
Kiya! *shriek of misbelief*

I had absolutely no idea you like these kind of things!

KIYA!

*breathes to calm herself down*

Nyao, no idea you're a romantic.

Oops, actually, I had this feeling, but...

How the hell did you get so, umm, romantic?

Is this really the Onii-sama I know?

Or is this the alter-ego (one of the many)?

KIYA! Mou iyo na, onii-sama.

KIYA!

*inhales and exhales deeply* Well, now, that's enough.
Rinikii chapter 3 . 10/31/2004
Now this is confusing... But WHY MUST IT END? IT'S SUCH A NICE STORY! So sad... Is he a ghost or what? Was he killed? I've got so many questions running through my mind now... Anyway, it's VERY sad... Good job though... Hope there's a sequel to it...

-§«¥ë-
me again chapter 3 . 10/30/2004
*sigh...(i hope lotsa people flame you!)

here i go with the apprentice work requested...

lets get this over with.*

first thing,you do know Assasins dont FLOAT or FLY!Especially without wings!

I got everythin and the story's danged sad...

but you know,i wouldnt have understood the stupid story if I didnt put a stupid comma in the kinda confusing without it...

plus your special flasback kinda came in handy too

now i know why he couldnt touch her even if he wanted to...

sigh...whydya have to make it so sad? the "goodbye my silly girl" had so much impact.. you shouldve just made it the title...but 'ja ne' was actually kinda appropriate too...

sigh cant you just make a stay together forever happy ending? whydya hav to kill anyway?

poor dead unhappy person...

your story is really nice if lotsa readers just notice all the small hints ya put in it,though

you left out lotsa stuff, w/c made evrythin all vague...you mustve confused lotsa people

but i guess thats the point of writin

mystery ?

*

phew...

Im done stupid onichan,

did what i had to

now its all up to them,

hope they aint that stupid.

nee?;) _ *

keep doin more!

and its a good thing you didnt

mock me

ja.
ya knw me chapter 2 . 10/26/2004
nice nichan keep updating... il be waitin...

I wonder where you got the ideas for the characters and stuff... i like em. gea and kaize that is...

oh, nd why is the title "ja ne"?

some one sayin gudbye?

no flaming...

oh, nd whose the other sis?

dang ya got lotsa sisters...

I come in peace and with candy!

bribe Fil gents with mentos!

perverts go to hell except me!(hint hint!)

your dum if you stil dunno me.

ja ne onichan! :p
guess whoI bet you know chapter 2 . 10/15/2004
Hey! It's actually good! You underestimate yourself. As for flames, I'd dump them. I'm in no mood to write flames...

Haha! No flames for you! * singsong * No flames for you! No flames for you!

Mwahahahaha!

Ja ne.

Onii-sama! Nyao!
Tom Valor chapter 2 . 8/15/2004
Hmph! You assassins think you're so cool...Well the fight scene was great. But it would have been better if your characters did not shout their ability's name (It's like watching a Voltes V fight or something...) it takes a lot of fun out of the fic. Still its quite good. Oh and no such word as "knightess" male and female knights are both simply called knights.
Tsukura chapter 2 . 8/15/2004
You, know.. that IS a good story, but, i don't think you need to add the 'my classmate is still gay' part
Tom Valor chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
Masyado maikli...pahabain mo chapters mo. Wait mag iingles na lang ako.

The first part seems interesting. Try to create an eye catching title though. It will attract more reviews. Update soon!
Rinikii chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
well, it IS just the first chapter but it isn't THAT confusing... but i had to read it about 3 times before i really understood it, to tell you the truth _ betcha must be really happy... newayz, can't wait for the next chapter now, continue!

-Skye Mihalak-
JaNRaGaLlNiTe chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Oo...quite ok...Update! Me wanna read more!