|Reviews for The Story Of Harry|
| Knotley chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
| Sirius Lover for Life chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Reading through it once, it seems a bit rushed and not very deep, but read it twice and I see that it IS actually pretty good.. "He is lost..." that line and everything after is good, but the first few verses don't really fit with the mood of the poem I think you were going for. A bit more time, and maybe a few more words, and you'll have one short, but powerful, piece of poetry!
| Pavi's Girl chapter 1 . 7/26/2004
Thats cool. It's written well and has a twist of humor the end.