|Reviews for Dragonball New Beginnings: The Arlean Saga|
| Guitarlover56784 chapter 20 . 4/11/2016
As you know, or would if you ever read these reviews, (my fanfiction screen name is guitarlover56784 btw, I'm just not logged in), I think gohan should have ascended. His hidden power should have pushed him there easily. He trained for ammit, or at least should have pushed his power level to a SS level three.
| Digitaldestiny360 chapter 86 . 5/21/2014
so this is actually my second time reading through your story. and i guess i already reviewed the final chapter once, so.i had to post instead. now i remember why you were once one of my favorite authors. anyways, while reading, i was also listening to music and came across a song that i think really matches Kanata's outlook during his time under Heata. Dead to the world by Bullet For My Valentine. not sure if you listen to reviewer advice, or even check this site anymore, but i hope you like the song match
| Guest chapter 87 . 10/7/2013
Amazing just simply amazing. (Applause)
| Nyxeka chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I love your exceptional (as all stories should have) grammar, and the whole freaking plot-etc...
the SS5 thing at the end was kind of silly but still cool
| PnutButtr chapter 87 . 5/31/2012
I'm on the verge of tears. This is my last review on my favorite story in all of Fanfiction! No one could write all, what 500,000 words that you did and actually change a person. You've taught me so many life lessons through this fic. I could go on for hours, blabbering on about mushy stuff like that, but I won't because I want to go to bed! Lol! Anyway, I hope you decide to obtain a career in writing cause I would most definitely read anything you wrote. ;) These are tears of joy. :)
| PnutButtr chapter 86 . 5/31/2012
Wow. That's deep man. That's frickin deep.
| PnutButtr chapter 85 . 5/31/2012
Hmmm, I wonder what will happen next?
| PnutButtr chapter 84 . 5/31/2012
Eek! What happened?
| PnutButtr chapter 82 . 5/31/2012
Oh no! Not Trunks! ;(
| PnutButtr chapter 80 . 5/26/2012
Seven chappies left! Can't wait to see the outcomes of the battles!
| PnutButtr chapter 62 . 4/28/2012
Wow. I haveb't reviewed in a while. Anyway, I still think your the best writer on fanfiction. You have so much creativity in you. Trust me, I can't write any of that cheesy romance shit either! XP
| PnutButtr chapter 39 . 3/27/2012
This was one of the most confusing yet greatest chapter I have ever read!
| PnutButtr chapter 35 . 3/27/2012
Can't wait to finish reading this! And I'm only on chapter 35! Lol My English teacher wishes that at least one of her students could write like you (probably) so yes you are one of the best writers on ! Thanks for writing! XD
| Kazuma Bushi chapter 86 . 2/22/2012
Are u ever gonna follow up this story, or write another story again.
| Kazuma Bushi chapter 87 . 2/22/2012
Your new transformation was cool, this is an even better story than the original