I don’t know if you still come on here anymore. I just want you to know I read this story a few years ago. I just read it again, it’s still one of thee most amazing stories I’ve ever read. I hope you’re following your dreams. I hope you write books and novels. This story still impacts my life and is one of thee most well written character development arcs of all time. Thank you.

More than a decade later...my second time reading this.
Bravo to you wherever you are, God bless you .

As you know, or would if you ever read these reviews, (my fanfiction screen name is guitarlover56784 btw, I'm just not logged in), I think gohan should have ascended. His hidden power should have pushed him there easily. He trained for ammit, or at least should have pushed his power level to a SS level three.

so this is actually my second time reading through your story. and i guess i already reviewed the final chapter once, so.i had to post instead. now i remember why you were once one of my favorite authors. anyways, while reading, i was also listening to music and came across a song that i think really matches Kanata's outlook during his time under Heata. Dead to the world by Bullet For My Valentine. not sure if you listen to reviewer advice, or even check this site anymore, but i hope you like the song match

Amazing just simply amazing. (Applause)

awesome read,
I love your exceptional (as all stories should have) grammar, and the whole freaking plot-etc...

the SS5 thing at the end was kind of silly but still cool

I'm on the verge of tears. This is my last review on my favorite story in all of Fanfiction! No one could write all, what 500,000 words that you did and actually change a person. You've taught me so many life lessons through this fic. I could go on for hours, blabbering on about mushy stuff like that, but I won't because I want to go to bed! Lol! Anyway, I hope you decide to obtain a career in writing cause I would most definitely read anything you wrote. ;) These are tears of joy. :)

Wow. That's deep man. That's frickin deep.

Hmmm, I wonder what will happen next?

Eek! What happened?

Oh no! Not Trunks! ;(

Seven chappies left! Can't wait to see the outcomes of the battles!

Wow. I haveb't reviewed in a while. Anyway, I still think your the best writer on fanfiction. You have so much creativity in you. Trust me, I can't write any of that cheesy romance shit either! XP

This was one of the most confusing yet greatest chapter I have ever read!

Can't wait to finish reading this! And I'm only on chapter 35! Lol My English teacher wishes that at least one of her students could write like you (probably) so yes you are one of the best writers on ! Thanks for writing! XD