Reviews for Heartbeat
whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Oh my goooosh. That was so fantastic. :O I love your writing style; it's so unique. :D

I haven't read that volume of Young Justice (i've only read #6 slkdjflkdajlskfdj) but i kinda get what happened based on uhh.. what you mentioned in this fic.

*cough* So great. Wish there was more. D:
Anaki Starsong chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
I'm just bedding into this fic set, I've seen a ton of pics of this pairing, and gotta say you have hooked me! I want to read a lot more into this pairing. Don't stop writing! You know exactly what to say and how to say it. You give just enough detail without too much exposition, and your characterization is just vague enough to let the already established characters come through and not seem like alienated recreations. Thanks for the excellent read!
perilxxx chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
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jessica499499 chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Dramatic to the max! I love the ending line! Very fitting and awesome!
Nerisel chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Oh! I love this story, even though I'm not really familiar with the fandom (just got into it), but it really is very vivid and beautiful. :) And the way you go about describing the context is amazing, seeing that I started off reading with no idea what's going on and finished with a sharp picture in mind and a smile.
Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Ah, so lovely D: You wrote it pretty well, without overstepping the line separating good fic to PWP xD

I really felt that :3 The warmth and sweetness and such xD Nice job.
ReKoJ chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Poor Robin. The holding hands thing was adorable.
Lily Carroll chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Oh dear my...

Your fic is sweet and sad ;_;

I adored the plot and your descriptions, great job! fic gorgeus
Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
Aw, I love KonTim! I've never read Young Justice though, but still, any fluff filled KonTim story is good enough for me even if I don't know the story behind it.
Rosadina chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
The last line was especially awesome. It was a great story overall and is going in my c2 archive and you're going on my author alerts.
Ed's Tomato chapter 1 . 8/22/2005
Wow...I really liked that. Of course, now everytime I read 'teen of steel' I'm going to snicker uncontrolably. Heh heh heh. I'm not usually a big fan of Kon/Robin just because it's so hard to do without seeming so OOC...as with any charecter that isn't written to be gay...besides He-Man...which is totally irrielevant, but I bought the old cartoons the other day and that man wears pink and lavender has a pageboy haricut and says Fabulous. each to his own, but I'm just sayin...

At any rate. I really liked this story. Sad it's so short, but the best ones always leave you wanting more.
Saturn's Hikari chapter 1 . 7/24/2005
did I review this yet? I must have read it like twenty times.

Adore it.

Specailly now that I've half seen the Apokolips episode? arc? comic? what's the proper word?

But yes, I love this and you're on my favorites!
greysnyper chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Ack! ACK!1

SOGOOD!

That was amusing, and heartful and wonderful and amazing!

The feeling part, wow. That was worded good. How he exused the whole thing as having to prove Kon was there. And then Kon joking, then serious. And telling Robin that he's too tired to deal with this but holding his hand would work. Aw. I shouldn't have read this in school. I'm needing to jump around and squee right now. So good!

One thought is that Tim thinks too much. Just, you don't need to explain every detail of his thoughts. If you ever revise this, maybe tone down on the internalizing. Because actions always speak louder and you've got a whole handful of amazing potent writing skill here. Lovely. I loved it!
stranj100 chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
Never enough Kon & Tim. I hope you write more.
youngwind2 chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
thats a sweet story. It's good to see kon/tim slash storys
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