Reviews for Storm
yaoifangirl42 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
but it's fine and works and i loved it! sasuke is such a sexy mcsexy pants and naruto, guuuurl, his body was ready. (omg i can't believe i just said that)

i liked it though. gonna favorite now
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
wow. . .
WhimsyUsagi chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
lmao. i was about to cry along with naruto when i started laughing at the end. rofl. nice
darkenedmirrors.softfocus chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
I love your writing style. It's like, you have all this angst and then BAM, LETS SCREW.

Was it supposed to be funny?

I liked it though.
wff-writer chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
lol a bit quick but that don't mean it was bad.
False-Image chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
Hahaha! Great fanfic! It was funny
Froffify chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
LMAO this story was ace faves poor naruto at the begining tho and the sasuke comments were ACE man lol
Melanie chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Cute idea. I agree with the p.s. at the end of your story. I hope you re-write the end, but the rest is good. I like the detail .
Charlie911 chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
screw? shag? okay not that it's any of my business and not an insult or anything but i can't really imagine them saying those words. i mean insults at each other but shag as in shaggin. it's hard to imagine.
Tom chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
Lmao. That was fantastic!
Scared-of-the-dark chapter 1 . 6/11/2005're right the ending is to quick but other wise good story
daisyink chapter 1 . 2/9/2005
*grin* Hahaha, I liked it. SasuNaru...yum..._

The fortune cookie one made me laugh.

Naruto and Sasuke on a rainy day...

*grins wider*
voicelikeabell chapter 1 . 12/13/2004
lol i loved it
Nuppu chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Oh, come on, you skipped the best part! So not fair! -_-' Damn you.

Well, it was just too sweet... too nice. Sasuke and Naruto really are a great couple. And this was a good story of them. _ Good, good.
mikazuki senshi chapter 1 . 8/21/2004

i likes it a lot

write more soon, ne?
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