Reviews for Raven Returns
Ravensister chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Please read and review and for the RobXRae Fans your gonna love it.D

CHAPTER TWO:RAVENS COSTUME

"Very funny Beastboy"Raven said annoyedly

"Friend Raven is that you?"asked Starfire

"Yeah who else it would be?"commented Raven dryly

"Oh! how joyous to know it is you now may we see your costume?"Starfire excitedly said to Raven as she Clapped her hands

Raven stepped forward and she was dressed as a Princess doll with long purple hair.
Everybody starred at her.

"Oh what a wonderful costume friend Raven" Commented Starfire waving her pompoms

"Thanks Starfire"Raven replied at Starfire

"How did you get your hair so long so fast is it a wig?"asked Beastboy poking Raven's hair

"No I chant a spell on my hair to stay long until I cut it again"Raven explained

"Well cmon y'all lets go get some candies"Cyborg said giving their pumpkin baskets to the rest of the team

"Nice costume Raven"Robin complimented to her as they walk to the hallways

"Thanks yours to Robin"Raven answered

After the titans go trick or treating they went in the T-car

"Cmon y'all lets go partying"said Cyborg as he put all of the teams baskets at the trunk

"Yeah I saw on the poster down the street that the winner of the costume contest gets a free prize"Beastboy said excitedly

"Cmon team lets go to that party"Robin said

"Yes and I am sure one of us is going to win the costume contest"Starfire added

"Yeah just a bit tired maybe,but I could still come" as Raven put her seatbelt

The titans arrived at the big party house and entered
Most of teenagers,kids where dressed like teen titans,witches,princesses ,and tooth fairies

After two hours it is time for the crowningPrince,Queen,King and Princess of Halloween

"Ok everybody please go to the dance floor to crown our royal halloween crowning and our judges decide that the crowned princess and price will sing 5 songs for tonight separately and dance on the dance floor"Host said as everybody went to the dance floor the Titans sticked together but Raven was missing everyone looked around to whom the spotlight will come to

The spotlight started swirling around to look for the winners.

"Ok the Halloween Queen of the year is...Cat Woman! " the Host said as the spotlight went at Cat Woman

Every body cheered as she go up at the stage and put on her crown

"Now lets know who is the King of Halloween,the winner is...Zorro!" (Host) the spotlight spot at Zorro and ran to the stage as the spot light followed and he wore his crown

"Know the mystery is who will dance with the mystery princess is...Bat Man!" The host said when it spotted Robin in his Bat man Costume and as the host pulled him on stage and put his crown

"I am nearly joyful of who will Robin dance with"As Starfire said to her friends

"Ok now is the time that you all been waiting for the princess of the night is...Princess Doll!"the host said by looking around,The spotlight stopped at the satirs where Raven (dressed as a princess doll)
Raven and beast boy12 chapter 5 . 3/25/2013
this is so so so grate. sad, and just mixed emotions
Guest chapter 14 . 12/29/2012
Its good but raven should be a little bit more into reading books
Raven chapter 18 . 10/11/2012
Great story. I like the raven and robin romance in it Ive always wanted them to get together but it never happened...and you did great on making the characters how they actually are and I imagined Raven's older self exactly the same. I never imagined robins hair that long...and named nightwing. I was waiting for him to take batmans job like he was gomna but it's a fanfic, great job
Concolor44 chapter 12 . 2/8/2011
Zurl, the Steward of Trigon?

Zuul, the Minion of Gozer?

Why do I NOT like the sound of that? Things may get really, really tense before they get better.
Concolor44 chapter 11 . 2/8/2011
Yeah, and howsabout explaining to US what's going on! I'm terribly confused.
Concolor44 chapter 9 . 2/8/2011
... pant ...

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... pant ...

DamNATION but those two are cute together!
Concolor44 chapter 7 . 2/8/2011
No, honey, he AIN'T a boy anymore. And YOU ain't a little girl, either! Get with the program!

I'm glad Vic's anger blew over. That's a relief.

Time to 'Favorite' this one.
Concolor44 chapter 6 . 2/8/2011
Geez, what's Vic's problem? The girl had issues and didn't want to endanger her friends, the only friends she actually HAD. He needs to have some things EXPLAINED TO HIM.

And Robin needs to be careful not to get drool on his chest.
Concolor44 chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
I always knew Star had it in her. Cooking earth food couldn't be THAT different from cooking Tamaranean food. Just different ingredients.

Gotta wonder what Raven's so insecure about. What's she been up to that makes her doubt herself so severely?
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
You always wondered whether she'd do that, dincha? It would make sense, given some of the things that happened.
Kaiba1288 chapter 18 . 4/30/2009
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,

Good luck with this & any others you may write.

Peace

Kaiba1288
1naomi chapter 18 . 8/11/2006
I LOVED THAT STORY GREAT WRITER 2
Kaiba1288 chapter 15 . 7/18/2006
Hi have you written chapter 16 of your awesome fan fiction i can view chapters 1-15 & 17-18 but not ch 16.

good luck with what you write next

peace

Kaiba 1288
keyckx chapter 18 . 1/5/2006
lol...the ending (not including the epilogue .
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