Reviews for Stories About a Girl
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
This is at least the forth story I've read. While your prose is nice, it feels like you're just putting out pretty words and not really trying to tell a story. (Sorry... I'm going through the older Bleach fics right now, and your stories are what I'm finding right now.)
NinthFeather chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
You know, I really want to ship Ichihime, but people keep writing Ishihime so well...particularly you. This is excellent, no two ways about it. I really liked how you wrote Ishida, and your very accurate observations about Orihime. Great job!
jee chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Love this one too - now mourning how Orihime always pays attention to Ichigo, even though that relationship could only hurt her, and never pays attention to Ishida. :(

But a very good little fic, lets us get inside the mind of a complex and complicated character who needs more love.
StrictlySomething chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Hmmm. You have some random explanations(for the reader? or maybe just Uryu's observations?) about Orihime's hair and her hairclips that seemed slightly disjointed("her hair- long, long because of(for) Tatsuki...", " from her brother, though she didn't like them...", and "They are not exactly scouting and not exactly not.").

Ishida has a good point on whether or not the Shun Shun Rikka are a race... perhaps similar to a zanpakuto as they are the form of her spiritual power?

All in all, very sweet musing on Ishida's part!

Lover of Stories 24 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Only one thing to say... Adorable. Completely adorable. 3
SilentlyDoomed chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
ishida is so sweet in this, almost poetic. orihime is well orihime. who else?
Who Knows Who I Am chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
i love the idea of Ishida and Orihime falling in love (*sigh*), so i really liked this story

I havent checked out ur other stories yet, but i think you should write some more adventures between these two.

RedBrunja chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
i love the last part! ;)

"i could listen to your voice forever..."

that's from Ishida to Orihime, right? :D
Sakura Irving chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I like the idea, but I'm not quite use to present sounds a bit weird to me, but like I said, I don't read many fanfics in present tense.

Very good. :)
virtualailee chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Hi! This is nice! Short and nice and cute! Can't believe this story is three years old!

All the best!

Ai Lee
aln9876 chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
::looks at the impressive amount of stories and realises that there are no half-assed unfinished ones:: A writer who writes! Hallelujah! And boy can you write. Love this fic, love the wording, now love the pair, LOVE YOU (right now). Fabulous job, this gave me shivers.
Gina chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
I loved it. I can't quite say why, but I did.
AnimeGirl622 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
OMIGOSH! Thank you so much for this peice! I love this! AND I LOVE ISHIME PAIRINGS! TY TY TY!
Eveilae chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Ah! Ishida's so SWEET! I must THANK Moonsheen because Bleach fics are GOOD eatin'. Yum.

Thank you.
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