|Reviews for Stories About a Girl|
| Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
This is at least the forth story I've read. While your prose is nice, it feels like you're just putting out pretty words and not really trying to tell a story. (Sorry... I'm going through the older Bleach fics right now, and your stories are what I'm finding right now.)
| NinthFeather chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
You know, I really want to ship Ichihime, but people keep writing Ishihime so well...particularly you. This is excellent, no two ways about it. I really liked how you wrote Ishida, and your very accurate observations about Orihime. Great job!
| jee chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Love this one too - now mourning how Orihime always pays attention to Ichigo, even though that relationship could only hurt her, and never pays attention to Ishida. :(
But a very good little fic, lets us get inside the mind of a complex and complicated character who needs more love.
| StrictlySomething chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Hmmm. You have some random explanations(for the reader? or maybe just Uryu's observations?) about Orihime's hair and her hairclips that seemed slightly disjointed("her hair- long, long because of(for) Tatsuki...", "...gift from her brother, though she didn't like them...", and "They are not exactly scouting and not exactly not.").
Ishida has a good point on whether or not the Shun Shun Rikka are a race... perhaps similar to a zanpakuto as they are the form of her spiritual power?
All in all, very sweet musing on Ishida's part!
| Lover of Stories 24 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Only one thing to say... Adorable. Completely adorable. 3
| SilentlyDoomed chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
ishida is so sweet in this, almost poetic. orihime is well orihime. who else?
| Who Knows Who I Am chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
i love the idea of Ishida and Orihime falling in love (*sigh*), so i really liked this story
I havent checked out ur other stories yet, but i think you should write some more adventures between these two.
| RedBrunja chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
| Irma.Arisa.Laye chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
i love the last part! ;)
"i could listen to your voice forever..."
that's from Ishida to Orihime, right? :D
| Sakura Irving chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
I like the idea, but I'm not quite use to present tense...it sounds a bit weird to me, but like I said, I don't read many fanfics in present tense.
Very good. :)
| virtualailee chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Hi! This is nice! Short and nice and cute! Can't believe this story is three years old!
All the best!
| aln9876 chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
::looks at the impressive amount of stories and realises that there are no half-assed unfinished ones:: A writer who writes! Hallelujah! And boy can you write. Love this fic, love the wording, now love the pair, LOVE YOU (right now). Fabulous job, this gave me shivers.
| Gina chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
I loved it. I can't quite say why, but I did.
| AnimeGirl622 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
OMIGOSH! Thank you so much for this peice! I love this! AND I LOVE ISHIME PAIRINGS! TY TY TY!
| Eveilae chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Ah! Ishida's so SWEET! I must THANK Moonsheen because Bleach fics are GOOD eatin'. Yum.