Reviews for The Birthday Boy Remains Unwilling
Naoko Mint chapter 8 . 1/15/2010
Really wished they kissed at the end. I know it would have been expected for them to kiss, but it would have been more enjoyable!
Cloner4000 chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
attack of the man-eating fluffy animal! on the savior of the planet no less lol. Nice ending. Parts of the humor are really well done. So much ruined moments. Very nicely done
Azamiko chapter 8 . 3/21/2007
*grin* Aww...squishy!
Debatra chapter 8 . 2/21/2007
You blew the ending. The rest was great. What you should've done was. 1. Have the interruption, 2. Have Virginia and Jet get mad at Gallows and Clive 3. Have Jet not say "Do I get a share?", 4. Had the "classic"/"cliched"/"expected" ending

and have Virginia and Jet fall in love. Maybe I take vidio games too seriously, but that's what I would have done. 8/10
darkfox chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
this is a great story! i love it! it really is good ; )
kurokiko chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
See how dangerous furry animals can be? "Amf" Clive is my favorite! But hey, I like this story. I really thought something was going to happen in the end. hehe _
Riny Beoulve chapter 8 . 1/2/2005
Well, there was a lot of build up and then it just kind of died off at the end. You got us hopeful and then nothing happened!

I loved the cheese thing. That was hilarious. :-D

And the ending had me in stitches. I figured Clive would have fallen out of the tree, but I didn't think he'd be attacked by squirrels!

Your humor is very good, just build a little bit of a stronger story and you'll have amazing stories. Keep writing!
MAB chapter 8 . 10/23/2004
WRITE MORE! i loved it! you rock at this!
Fukki-chan chapter 8 . 9/26/2004

That's so great! I'm laughing so hard I'm crying!

I loved this story! It's so fuuny!

Clive being attacked by squirrels...


That image is going to to saty with me for a LONG time...

Rickiel chapter 8 . 9/24/2004
Gallows: Now see here Jet, if I win the bet you get 50% of the earnings, I call this a cut.

Jet: Helping me earn more money by influencing the outcome of the bet! BRILLIANT!


Virginia:...*drags Jet to VIP room* NO MONEY!

Jet: No money? NOT BRILLIANT!

Rickiel:...anywho, nice job, I can only imagine what happened _-
A. Mills chapter 8 . 9/24/2004
Well the ending was kind of anti-climatic (I want to know if they kissed dammit!) but it was quite good to read.

By the way, has anyone else had the problem of Chapter 7 ending before it should've?
Karana Belle chapter 8 . 9/24/2004
oh, such a cute ending, but it's really sad that it is done! but i really loved this story, it was so adorable! and the ending sentence was funny. please write another one! please? i would be so happy. keep up the fabulous work!

Karana Belle
psychedelic aya chapter 8 . 9/24/2004
That was such a funny last chapter! Hilarious! You've outdone yourself once more... it was terrific! _

But wait. Did you just say, LAST CHAPTER? the END? NO...

But nevertheless, loved it! Write more! Big fan of your stories... 'specially the WA3 ones. LoL. Keep it up!:D
Saddened Soul chapter 8 . 9/23/2004
Haha. Really now, at least Clive wasn't seriously drunk.

Kratos: It would seem so.

*A strange running noise is heard as Dark Link(paranoid foolish, comical idiot) bursts through the door*

Dark Link: You guys have gott a help me! They're coming! I stole their acorns by accidenT!

Kratos: Theivery is a sin, you should be


I agree. Let's leave Dark Link to his atonement.

Dark Link: NO!

*A pack of rabid squirrels frantically attack Dark Link as he jumps down into the large, foreboding city... Whatever that was*

Jonaleepuff chapter 8 . 9/23/2004
Hehehehehehhehe that was so cute! XP Looking forward to your next work!
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