|Reviews for The Challenge|
| chadcrazy chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
when will the story be
| All My Children Freak chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
OMG you need to continue this... it has so much promise in it... you need to be more detailed though.
here's an idea: it's a drama fic, so put some drama in it! If it gets meladramatic (that means really dramatic that the viewer wants to barf or something) then thats alright, that's what a soap is for!
Anywayz this is really good and you need to continue it.
| Amme Moto chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
this story was ok but you might want to be a little more discriptive. Like what the argument changed to. Arguments usually bounce from one thing to another so you could "waste space" by doing that. And add more quotations in the stiries, this is a fanfic, so do something totally out of ordinary with it! That's what this site is for! LOL
| SpencerNAshley4Ever chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
good job keep it up! i wish i could give u some help but i'm not taht good at writting them just reading them! sry bye