Reviews for Paying For It
Guest chapter 7 . 6/22/2013
Dylan stevens and dylan rossi are not gay!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
Oh my gosh! You all most gave me a heart attack. It's so sad, but really good
Neville-skywalker-lover chapter 7 . 9/28/2010
Love, love, love your story! Ashley/ellie! A hug from Elli aaaaaaaaannnnnnnnd Dylan pretty pls! thx 3
ellie chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
yeah it was good, im writing a marco and dylan fanfic, but i just havnt put it on here yet. i love marco, he is so cute, and his fear of bees "there like flying death monkeys!" ~marco

ashlee chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
I think you are incredibly good at writting these fanfictions and i hope to see you write more on marco and dylan. I enjoy this story very much! Even if marco is going through complete utter hell. I love how you give it so much detail. Thanks so much ,

totalgleek479 chapter 7 . 2/1/2008
great story, i hope u update soon
StarlightNinjaThief chapter 6 . 12/16/2007
question: wouldnt this make mr del rossi evrythin he doesnt want marco 2 b?
shirilyle chapter 7 . 6/25/2007
i like it keep it up
Briticism chapter 7 . 2/5/2007
Is there any particular reason you haven't updated this? It is/was good!
Briticism chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
hey, it's good, basically, but you could do with out the authors notes in the middle of your writing. the stuff about 'like in that 70s show'. That's very unprofessional and there's so many other ways to write it, without referencing another show and having to authors note. It's a fiction, not a screenplay. Other than that, it's good and you seem to have good natural talent for this.
MarcoLover16 chapter 3 . 12/23/2006
aH. That was very scary. I really like it, though, despite the fact that it's a little out there, but that's good. I know what you mean. I've been writing fanfiction since I was like ten, and still can't figure out how to use italics and stuff like that.
missmiamya chapter 7 . 4/6/2006
review for you half of the story!

1:Good Chapter...A little fast paced, but still good!

2: Grr...You cut off at good/bad parts...know what I mean? It was good though!

3:Aww sick! I knew his father hated him being gay, but Rape?...I really hope his father pays for it!

4:INTENSE! I would be extatic if that would actually happen in real life *just come back to life* I watched my dad die on a hospital bed a little over a year ago.

5:Good Chapter! I'm glad Marco told Dylan what happened

6: Why must you be so evil?...Cliffhangers suck for readers...That really can't be good Did his parents know he was at Dylans?

7: I can't believe he cut his arm! Obvious there! I hope everything works out with his dad being charged and found guilty...guess I read the continuation since I found that first and came here to read the beginning. Good so far!
Thayet-Victoria chapter 7 . 3/7/2006
Hey I just read your fic from start to finish and i loved it. I cant wait for the next update. Just so you know, it's not providences here in Canada, its Provinces. Providence is like fate. Anyway, as for your poll, I think it'll be Ellie and someone. I dunno who. Maybe ash although she seems a little too man obsessed. Can't wait for your next update
Sirius15894 chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
Positivly brilliant!
RandomAvocados chapter 6 . 6/29/2005
this is really good! update soon! Please!
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