|Reviews for Revelations|
| lettuce chapter 3 . 7/6/2007
nice concept, hope u keep going
| excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 8/6/2006
I hope you plan to update this. And I recognize the name Cain of Westmark (and that of his strange son Orion-you see, I've read THE RING by Daniel Keyes Moran).
I eagerly await most any kind of update from you-thanks!
| Ann-Droid chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
You’ve made the great mistake
One you can’t erase
Did you killed near all the light
To become evil darkness’s slave?
Like my little poem?
| Carnivore chapter 3 . 2/27/2005
Oh dear, this won't end well. I sincerely hope you update this soon.
| mon chapter 3 . 1/10/2005
nice to see an update. waiting to see how things are turning out
| Little Tigger chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Poor Severus, as if he didn't have ENOUGH to worry about what with the Dark Lord, and Loony Dumbledore, oh! and that pesky day job of his teaching eleven year olds the art of not blowing everyone up!
Poor, poor Severus. Cain is awesome. Creepy guy... Was he a Slytherin? Just wondering?
Hope the plot bunnies keep chasing you on this one! I'm looking forward to more!
:) Happy New Year!
| salzgurke chapter 3 . 12/11/2004
Ah update, good, I'm glad you're back on this one :-)...
Well, we don't mind depressing stories and violent plotbunnies, now do we? *giggles*...
Very nice chapter indeed, this minister is sinister, smooth lie by the headmaster and Sev in big trouble - what is there more to want for, hehe... Good suspense here and great style as always... :-)
| Oya chapter 3 . 12/4/2004
Oh no, is Sev in trouble?
| Lilithakaducky chapter 3 . 12/2/2004
That new minister is just as big a fool as Fudge was, right? What do they really want from Severus? Or is that 'interview' really only a farce and they have already sacked him in their heads?
Great writing you have here:-D
| rosiegirl chapter 3 . 12/2/2004
Good story so far!
| mon chapter 2 . 11/5/2004
I like this story.
| salzgurke chapter 2 . 11/4/2004
yikes, I cannot believe this cliffie! :-...
No, just joking... Like all your other stories I have read, I like this one as well. The prologue was very promising and I'm sure, I will shed tears later on (and isn't that the reason, we all read those fics? *grin*)... Hope you update soon! :-)
| Muses Fury chapter 2 . 10/19/2004
Hmm great story thus far. Can't wait for more! :-)
| bluebird161221 chapter 2 . 10/18/2004
-pulls out hair-
I can't believe you left us like this.
| Oya chapter 2 . 10/18/2004
Bleh. Its so short! So why did Severus not apply? Don't hurt him!
Wait, everyone died. Including Severus? T_T