Reviews for Love on a Deserted Island
xFlipJamsx chapter 11 . 2/24/2014
Please update the story I want to know how it ends
iKyoheii chapter 12 . 5/20/2012
ohhh this is great!

Looking forward for more!
hitsuruki4eva chapter 12 . 9/27/2011
Great story. Wish u would continue with the story
xFlipJamsx chapter 12 . 12/1/2010
please update the story, i would like to know what happens.
37th Street Goddess chapter 9 . 6/25/2010
Wow. I really need to review this fic cause it's getting crazier and crazier as story goes on.

First, the way Sora and Yamato fell off the ship through the storm. It was pretty lucky they didn't die. It was a ship after all, not some boat. Second, the worms, I mean earthworms, ew. That's that. Haha. Third, the fish for lunch. I know that when you're in an island, it's not easy to catch fish. What's more funny is that you made it sound like it was a walk in the park. Fourth, the bear? The boar? It would be crazy if it was a bear. Yamato has still an existing wound, the one where a stone got stuck, remember? He must have been ripped by the time the beast was finished with him. Fifth, the shark. Seriously? Do sharks swim in shallow waters? I don't know much but I don't think so. Another tragedy for Matt.

Then Sora and Matt's character are seemed immature. Sora gets angry or upset about things she shouldn't be. They're stranded and getting all that bitchy wouldn't help. She's like the stupid girl you'd love to hate but at the same time love to cheer on. Jumping into conclusion just because of some sketchy dialogue?uh-oh. Matt however is the wimp. How many times must he be injured? Getting attacked everytime and saved by his lady love is so wimpy don't you think?

This is getting too long and I'm sure you've improved your skill and imagination through the years. I just can't keep myself from not reviewing.

I'm still reading this though. It makes me laugh and this definitely makes my day!
lala land chapter 12 . 8/1/2006
loved it! update soon! (more fluff-aka s-x - lol)
puasluoma chapter 12 . 8/1/2006
Please continue!
DigitalRavenclaw chapter 11 . 4/14/2005
i love this story i just can't stop reading it!
DigitalRavenclaw chapter 12 . 4/13/2005
You must not leave me like this it's torture! I love your story and you must hurry and get the next chapter up fast!
S A K U R A22 chapter 12 . 4/7/2005
nice! i hope you update soon :]
matt chapter 6 . 3/19/2005
i cant believe u made matt do that u better change that REAL quick. plz?
Ravn MTM chapter 12 . 3/11/2005
so when ya gunna update?
Ravn MTM chapter 11 . 3/11/2005
oka you hade me there definitly not exspecting that good turn though thats awsome oh time for my plead please please please dont hurt yamato please please please
Ravn MTM chapter 8 . 3/11/2005
hm you know what if you hurt yama any more iwill... not stop reading your story its to good frikn a im in love with yama/sora ficks and i dont even know there proper name
Ravn MTM chapter 5 . 3/11/2005
why dose every one always end befor they kiss it increadibly annoying just get the bloody kiss out in the open seriusly
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