Reviews for Wizarding Betrothal
Guest chapter 16 . 8/11/2012
I was just wondering, does the war paint mean anything because your last line was "Rubbing at it she looked at her fingers. It was the war paint. Beautiful" and I was wondering does it signify something?
Cartman chapter 24 . 8/5/2012
Wow. Simply wow 33
Cookielove11 chapter 24 . 6/18/2012
I love this story. Lily and James are soooo adorable.
jowilleatyuh chapter 7 . 5/7/2012
*fan girl scream* Last line xD This chapter was really touching to be honest- Very cute and the personalities matched their sob stories :p Loved this chapter
jowilleatyuh chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
*face palm* at first, i honestly believed that you put Sirius in instead of James :p hehe those last few statements cleared up quite a lot :p
avadakejily chapter 24 . 5/2/2012
I really, really enjoyed reading this story! Original and quite imaginative, very good :)
Blue Aidelle chapter 2 . 5/1/2012

But in this story, does it mean they don't go to the same school?
theperksofbeingarunner chapter 24 . 4/19/2012
Ohmagosh! I just loved this story! It was soo cute!
luckycharm999 chapter 24 . 2/23/2012
OH MY GOD. So awesome! I started and finished this today and it was like so amazing! I would put you on my favourite's list but I always use my favourite's space for putting a story there when i have to go somewhere and i'm still reading because i'm too lazy to remember the story title or write it down.
writingblondie chapter 24 . 1/24/2012
Omg i absolutely adore this story! It was wonderful! You did an amazing job!
faith chapter 24 . 1/3/2012
okay can u believe i forgot to put my name for the previous comment anyywas your story was AMAZING i cant believe i finished read it and i cant believe it was written in 2005 :P and it 2012 omg wellllll i LOVE your story bye :)
Guest chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
I love it i just love lolzz i didnt even reach a quarter ofthe story yet but i love it :P when i heard sirius i was like whaaaaaaat but then i reache the end and i was ohhhhhh :P anyyyyways love yor story bye
LilyJames chapter 24 . 12/20/2011

Really loved this story - you did a great job
lazyball chapter 24 . 11/27/2011
hi i thought the chapter was awesome i was wondering if you could maybe do one more chapter because i wanted to read about their wedding i absoultly loved this chapter i think you could improve the details
Ashleyxx chapter 24 . 11/25/2011
this is a beautiful story. I have to admit, when i read the first couple of chapters and Lily was all about skateboarding... I didnt really get it. Im so glad I decided to read on, the characters were all written beautifully, the plot was au, but amazing, and I have fallen for James completely. The age gap was a great way of showing JK's ' I AM LILY AND I HATE JAMES' thing in a different way without being too unbelievable. Brilliant, just brill. Small request? Rose/scorpius? I really think you could do this paring the justice it needs! sorry for the long review, thanks again xx
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