Reviews for Wizarding Betrothal
LavenderSoapSmellsGood chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
AW

Thas so sweet!

At first, when I heard James say Sirius, I was kinda confused and thought that it was Sirius instead...

But that was smart...

Though Lily was kinda being stubborn.

Please update soon!
SapphireAngel6 chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
Great chapter! I'm not sure i like the big age difference, it just seem a little wierd. You had me scared for a little while when he said his name was sirius. Keep on posting!

~SapphireAngel~
LavenderSoapSmellsGood chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
hmm, a guy named Smack? interesting...lol

I liked the idea. Lily ice skating kool!

Is this related to Hogwarts in any way?

nice writing! update soon!
Frecklednproud chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
This chapter was great! So cute! I can't wait til you update! And it should be funny when Lily tries to teach James to skate! hehe. And the whole Sirius thing, hilarious!
Frecklednproud chapter 2 . 8/1/2004
I really like your story so far, and the idea of a bethroal. Its really interesting! I love how you depicte Lily's character, and the fact that Lily skates, thats awesome! I can't wait to read on!
patrioticangel chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
Aw... this story is really cute! But why did you make such a large age difference between Lily and James? Was there a specific reason? Well, update soon!
chewy1 chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
Oh Thank Goodness! I was worried for a second when he said his name was Sirius, **wipes sweat from forehead**. I thought it was awkward though Sirius wouldn't drag his hands through his hair but also the fact that you mentioned nothing of glasses threw me off too. Hmm...

This is an awesome story so far, "you's got skills!" Anyways, update soon, three chapters and you've already persuaded me to fall in love...lol...with the story of course!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Chewy
Frecklednproud chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
Wow, this is really interesting so far! Its really good. Really different. So, I must read on...
virgo-valentina chapter 3 . 8/1/2004
u shud accept annoymous reviews if u want more reviews u kno. a great chapter albeit a little confusing. cant wai add again!
James-RoxMySox chapter 3 . 7/31/2004
oh very good, very interesting with the conversation between Lily and James... I can understand Lily being so stubborn, i would be the same. please update soon this is excellent

Jen
angelo dell'inferno chapter 3 . 7/31/2004
thanks for answering my question. it is a really great story and i am enjoying it a lot!
virgo-valentina chapter 2 . 7/31/2004
aw...this story sounds sweet. I can't wai add the next chapter.

p.s. I recommend more spacing in the next chapter 4 easier reading
angelo dell'inferno chapter 2 . 7/31/2004
well, my first impressions were very good ones! i really do like this story. quick question. how old are they at the moment?
StarLightStarBright567 chapter 2 . 7/30/2004
Very intruiging. I like this story. I hope you update soon.

Peace and Roses,

Sunny Joe Bob
James-RoxMySox chapter 2 . 7/30/2004
this is very good, an interesting and alternate take on the liy and james story. i reeally like it hopefully you will continue. i can't wait to find out more about james.

Please update soon

Jenna
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