Reviews for Former Rivals
Good Job chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
For a first fan-fiction, this is amazing! You have a lot of talent, keep up the great work!
berry5tz chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Yes, very nicely done!
IceQueenElsa chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Awwwww adorable :3
amy.ibarra.98 chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
that was your first one! it twas amazing!
sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
awww, cute! :D xxxxx
Katietori chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I loved it! But one thing... Sasuke has eatin ichiraku ramen before... But other thn tht awsome! This made me want to finish another chapter of my story...
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Nice story!
KatrinaEagle chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
Wahahahaha! Naruto hides food like a squirrel? Ohmygod that line just made my day!

This is just great. It borders on total insanity, but hey, what's a fic without a dose of insanity, huh?
Zivaswords chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
aww I love it :)

Its so cute :D
Akuro chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
aw i loved that sweet little fic] the images of the lake and rain were very beautiful and i love love love how sasuke ate the ramen that naruto made, not him but someone else! so he really does love naruto3 well of course he does who wouldnt? ok enough ranting .
Pinuiini chapter 1 . 2/25/2008
awn I loved it
Alana-kittychan chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
Alana: cute

Evo: mm...
DOTBF chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
cute _~
mena chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
It was short but I liked it.
mena chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
It was short but I liked it.
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