Reviews for That Empty Feeling
bohr-d chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Great ending! This was a great story! Keep writing, you're really good at it!
Lukyirish12 chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
Wow! Your a wonderful writer. Your entire story was so beautifully portrayed! I LOVED it! I am hoping that you will write something new, and soon _

That was a really nice thing- I was hoping she would get her mothers stuff back! Here is an IDEA! As another, very small portion, write another ending where Kaoru USES the things she got back. Really, the truth is that, I don't want this to be the end. I want to read more of your writing! You could EASILY write a cute, romantic portion where Kaoru WEARS the peach Kimono. It would be adorable, and would satisfy my need, and not ONLY my need, for more.

I LOVE IT! Your amazing! I'll be waiting for more of your work :)
Tenshi no Hana-chan chapter 6 . 11/7/2004
That was a good ending!

Although, it was a bit... shall we say... bitin?

I don't know how to say it in English. I can't seem to find an English translation for this Filipino word...

Would lacking be a better word?

I don't know... I think your ending was a bit lacking. Nothing heavy, but then again, this story isn't that heavy either, though it has its share of weight.

Anyway, this little fic has left me with an empty feeling... in my stomach...
catti-dono chapter 6 . 11/6/2004
we find it very acceptable, domo arigatou for a good story...
ckat chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
yay! this is a really nice story lol... well create another one since its a job well done...
Marie Nomad chapter 6 . 11/6/2004
Oh! That was so good! I'm glad that Yahiko and Sano realized what happened and did everything they could to help. I wonder how Kenshin got Kaoru's stuff back. Hm... maybe he got a job with the police department or something.

I also wonder what job did Sano have? It could be innocent like a waiter or whatever. Anyway, congratulations on finishing your first fic. I know that must be so hard to do.

Great job! I hope to see more!
evilteddybear chapter 5 . 11/1/2004
Good job! *pats author on back* Keep up the good work and update soon!
nene-chan chapter 5 . 10/28/2004
no! too suspensfuL! must read more!
Lukyirish12 chapter 5 . 10/28/2004
Wow. I just loved the way you express Kenshin's worry. So incredible sweet, I can HEAR him saying her name, forgetting the -dono like we all know he wants to. This story is so wonderfully written! The plot and the dialogue just makes it all the better! I can't find any grammar mistakes to be sick with and no spelling to hate! The whole idea: One will sacrifice themselves, if only a little bit, for the people they love, is so evident here that it brings tears to my eyes. This story is wonderful, so GOOD. I am a little disheartened by the fact that your next, and final, update will be on November 6th, but I am atleast glad that I found your story. My next step is to hope and pray that you have more stories for me to read.

I hope you can derive some form of pleasure from my comments, as I have from your story. Let's wait and see how you finish this story, Na?
Lukyirish12 chapter 4 . 10/28/2004
I could have seen a romantic embrace here, something to feed the romance flames, but no matter, it turned out alright. Your description of hte moon shining on Kauro ws beutifully written. I also admire you for your stunning plot. This one can only hope that the story will continue... I am indeed, saddened by the fact that this will be ending soon...
Lukyirish12 chapter 3 . 10/28/2004
This is wonderful. The words, I can imagine them as if they were spoken softly, and sweetly. Everything fits so well. I am truly enjoying this, that I am.
Lukyirish12 chapter 2 . 10/28/2004
Kenshin will want to help her, that he will! Why in the WORLD would she want for him NOT to help her? Sure, they ARE important but- Megumi would feed her, or at least tell Kenshin. And Tae would feed her too, unless you mention that somehow there is a shortage of money/food.

I LOVE this, truly!
Lukyirish12 chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
I think this is wonderfully written. The characters AREN'T OOC. I am very VERY interested in reading more!

This one agrees- a sad Kauro is not good- but your story certaintly is!
Bradybunch4529 chapter 5 . 10/28/2004
Poor Kaoru. I don't think the boys are ever going to forgive her for keeping the problem from them. But I can actually see Kaoru doing this. Anything to keep her family with her. More soon I hope.
bohr-d chapter 5 . 10/28/2004
Great chappie! I can't wait for the next one- gotta find out if Kaoru'll be okay! Please update soon!
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