|Reviews for A New Quest|
| Calista-Cousland chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Ugh... this is terrible. It would take much too long to give critism, but I do not want you to take this as a "flame."
Just work harder at writing in a normal tone, instead of script form. Try using paragraphs, for example. Have you read a novel; take the format of that and attempt and honing your skills towards the likes of that.
One thing I am curious about, although, is why Link says, yes, to Navi in French. Hyrule is an alternate universe, with different races and a different language. Why, oh why, did you find it to be a good idea to include him speaking a language Hylians shouldn't know exsist!
| coti dahl chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
i think the storie is great and i totaly want more if you would plz
| Hannah Sievers chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
dat was good! write more! Cliffie!
| Chaos Lord chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Its called proper english
In the immortal words of Tingle
"Tingle, Tingle, Kooloo-Limpah"
| Crystal chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
zelda has blue eyes
| kristi chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
THAT WAS WEIRD. ANYWAY IT TENDS TO GRAB YOU SO WHAT HAPPENS TO ZELDA
| joahua chapter 1 . 10/5/2001
| linkkills chapter 1 . 1/2/2001
| Seifer Almasy chapter 1 . 7/2/2000
Make Zelda die!
| tears of the dead chapter 1 . 6/25/2000
this is very good but i want to hear the rest
| Christi chapter 1 . 5/20/2000
Punctuation check please.
| StarDragon chapter 1 . 4/25/2000
Try not to write in play format. That format reeks and doesn't let you write to your full potential.
| Shannon chapter 1 . 4/22/2000
That was a little wierd. Here's why, okay, forst off, it's in script form... and that is irritating. And one minute the king hates Link and the next he could care less. Kinda wierd ending too, if ya ask me. Are you gonna write a sequel or leave it?
| DarkLink chapter 1 . 4/20/2000
What happened to Zelda?write a sequel!
| mergirl chapter 1 . 4/18/2000
yikes. that was really weird. like, the way you say things. it sounded- let's just say different.