Reviews for Harry Potter and Merlin's Gifts
Dogwolf12 chapter 7 . 9/16
Sturgeon's Law: 90% of anything is rubbish.

You, my friend, are in the 10%.

Keep writing!
Guest chapter 37 . 9/22/2017
This story was never completed.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/20/2017
I've never understood why Harry doesn't leave a clone with Jasmine, or at least send one to visit her. There is no point in them missing each other or Jasmine crying. By the way, the original Council was going to have Lily raise Jasmine as her own, but Lily never has anything to do with Jasmine because Molly is raising the baby.
dianaanne chapter 37 . 8/26/2017
Interesting story; sorry it was never finished. You two clearly out a lot of work into it.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 4 . 6/6/2017
ok. that's a surprise. and harry is doing surprisingly little with jasmine. you'd think he would have to watch her while tuney runs the house, or reverse.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/7/2017
Severus... is... laughing...
Guest chapter 14 . 5/7/2017
This is a great story. I love the familial relationship between Severus and Harry! It seems to suit Severus much better than his bat in the dungeons persona lol.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/1/2017
Amazing sorry but there is a lot going on. I like how his parents came back and I think the cloning is cool and how there is another set of twins and his relationship with Severus, and add in a baby! There were several chapters that you just completely forgot about some of those things, and maybe it was on purpose, but even then that is not a good writing style. I honestly think you need to make it simpler, and it really is an amazing story and I wish I could write as well as you do.


Guest chapter 37 . 2/14/2017
Please please update

Potterhead chapter 37 . 1/30/2017
I'm soooooooooooooo annoyed
Plus I'm in love with this story so pllleeeaaasssseeeeeeeeeeeee finish it or I swear I'll die
Chicwowwow chapter 6 . 12/8/2016
I'm enjoying the story so far, but all the conversations feel slightly rushed. There's just not quite enough detail. Still, worth reading.
Ann Ony Mous chapter 18 . 10/5/2016
Guest chapter 14 . 4/26/2016
Hey. are u alright? It's been 8 years since ur last update! Maybe finish what u started? :P
Guest chapter 37 . 2/12/2016
Will you ever be continuing this story? Please!
Eagle-Eyes chapter 37 . 1/20/2016
What a wonderful story...

Shame it hasn't been updated in a while...

Leaving us with a way to imagine the next scenes was a great idea...,

Keep writing as life allows...
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