Reviews for Harry Potter and Merlin's Gifts
Guest chapter 20 . 4/1
Amazing sorry but there is a lot going on. I like how his parents came back and I think the cloning is cool and how there is another set of twins and his relationship with Severus, and add in a baby! There were several chapters that you just completely forgot about some of those things, and maybe it was on purpose, but even then that is not a good writing style. I honestly think you need to make it simpler, and it really is an amazing story and I wish I could write as well as you do.


Guest chapter 37 . 2/14
Please please update

Potterhead chapter 37 . 1/30
I'm soooooooooooooo annoyed
Plus I'm in love with this story so pllleeeaaasssseeeeeeeeeeeee finish it or I swear I'll die
chicwowwow chapter 6 . 12/8/2016
I'm enjoying the story so far, but all the conversations feel slightly rushed. There's just not quite enough detail. Still, worth reading.
Ann Ony Mous chapter 18 . 10/5/2016
Guest chapter 14 . 4/26/2016
Hey. are u alright? It's been 8 years since ur last update! Maybe finish what u started? :P
Guest chapter 37 . 2/12/2016
Will you ever be continuing this story? Please!
Eagle-Eyes chapter 37 . 1/20/2016
What a wonderful story...

Shame it hasn't been updated in a while...

Leaving us with a way to imagine the next scenes was a great idea...,

Keep writing as life allows...
Branchkk chapter 37 . 11/1/2015
I love the story and wondered if you've abandoned it. The last update was 2008, it's 2015 now. I'm not demanding anything, just concerned about the long stop on the story. I would like/ love to read more chapters wrote by you. Hopefully it'll come.
lalo80 chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Porfa actualiza pronto
Alexis Mayhem chapter 37 . 7/12/2015
I love this story pleeeeease update!
Miss Millie chapter 37 . 7/8/2015
I think I have been here before. You spent so much time on your story setting it up making us keep up with your logic, some or most we've never even herd before, and then on top you make H&G have a stupid fight and then leave us not knowing about the mirror, Harrys great house and Ginny being born for Harry, just too many things in the last few ch. That just out the window like they are strangers that just met that don't have a history to talk about what's upsetting or I have found out something you need to know about. When are you going to update your story? Or are you so bored that you aren't going to finish it.
Most writers just hook us in and I know some writers who have over 1,000 reviews and stopped writing they don't care how many Hr we spend reading or rereading there stories, I try real hard not to read stories that are not finished because of being left hanging.
Good luck with all you do. But Pleasssssssssssssssssse write more.
Miss Millie
Miss Millie chapter 17 . 7/6/2015
some stories don't let you review more than once this is I think the 3 or 4 time I have read your story. I love baby Harry and Snape's part in it. I like it that all are friends and NL and LL are too.
WhiteElfElder chapter 37 . 6/24/2015
Definitely interesting. Even though Harry has all this knowledge running around, he is not all knowing and all powerful.
WhiteElfElder chapter 21 . 6/23/2015
Was it the mirror that spoke?
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