|Reviews for Harry Potter and Merlin's Gifts|
| Miss Millie chapter 37 . 2/23
I just reread your story for 3days. Hello are you still out there? Any one home? What happened? You spent so much time writing this story just to leave all the frends. Over 10000! You have made while we get to know your take on the wonderful world of Harry and family! I love that Harry is taking care of Jazzy! Pleassssssssssssssssssssssssssse write more! You have some awsome writers who have R&R!
I am such a H&G fan thanks, I was so busy reading I just couldn't review sorry. I hope you still find time to check out your reviews, so you know we still are reading or rereading your story.
Good luck in all you do. FYI I am 69 years old and to spend my time that I might have leftin this life reading your story instead of doing something else is a great loss. If you never finishe it. I have a bucket list! But instead of reading the great classics like my friends one is reading War and Peace! I choose your story! I hope Harry and Ginny make up since they are made for each other maybe Jazzy could start calling her Mom? It would help get them together maybe.
| MMe. Pince chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
you wrote: "They were having small stakes and a salad..." They will definitely lose weight eating stakes. Unless of course, they are beavers. Otherwise, they should be eating steak and salad.
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/21/2013
CAPTIAN Jack Sparrow
I live it when Johnny says that :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
They were having small stakes and a salad (because Dudley was still dieting). -i apologize if this offends you but the word is steak. Now, you did spell it with a word that sounds identical, so that's not a bad mistake. However, a stake is a sharpened wooden implement designed for driving into the ground to hold a tent in place; stakes can be made of metal and are also useful for killing vampires. This is also a funny mistake because I can imagine them sitting around the table, knawing on small sharpened wooden implements. LOL.
Anyway, I don't mean to be harsh or cruel. You're writing is very good and you have very few mistakes. You do have a few typos and misspelled words here and there, but overall, you are much better than most writers when it comes to spelling and grammar. For that reason, I give this a 4.8 out of 5.0
| beauty12 chapter 37 . 9/8/2013
great story so far can’t wait for more please update soon..
| Me chapter 37 . 7/5/2013
The story was awesome! I had hoped you would complete it...
| Kaito Hatake Uchiha chapter 37 . 6/28/2013
Kaito is hungry want to eat
| Dashusi4ka chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
logic fled this..
| LWJ2 chapter 28 . 4/21/2013
Oddly enough, I arrived here via Bobmin's updateless list.
You've an excellent story, I'm enjoying it. It appears you've good and substantial reasons for erratic updates, whatever they are, I hope you come through them successfully and return to writing.
| Anon Reader chapter 37 . 4/9/2013
U passed the given date by over a month. UPDATE!
| hcic chapter 21 . 3/15/2013
I'm always amused at the number of Harry Potter fan fiction authors who put forth the idea "there is no Light and Dark magic, there is only only magic and the intentions of those who use it".
It reminds me so strongly of the first book, when Voldemort is monologing at Harry and says: "There is no good and evil, there is only power, and those too weak to seek it..."
My amusement can be summed up as: "if everything is relative, then nothing is real" - and considering this is a fantasy, fiction story that would be true.
(FYI - I figure the original author has stopped monitoring his reviews over half a decade later, so my reviews are mostly a way to express internal thoughts and partly for the benefit of those who check reviews before reading a story. That said, it's a fantastic story for those who are wondering... I've just thrown out a few pet peeves as I've come across them.)
| hcic chapter 12 . 3/15/2013
I always hated this take on Luna. It basically destroys a strong female character only to replace her with either a totally broken soul who can't cope or else a manipulative loser who isn't actually a friend to anyone (since she actively and knowingly lies to Harry and company about who she really is... they don't know her and so can't be her friend and she is just using them from her "superior position"). Unfortunately it's a choice too many authors have gone with simply because they don't know how to write her character.
Oh well, at least it's better than all those folks who don't know how to write Ron and simply settle for some asinine bashing.
| hcic chapter 10 . 3/15/2013
I cannot describe the amusement I feel... you ended a chapter titled "Harry's Girls" like THAT?!
| Potterformers chapter 26 . 2/3/2013
everyone needs every now and then
| Potterformers chapter 23 . 2/3/2013
couldn't an omarge to Won-Won huh