Reviews for In the darkness of Azkaban
Blood Red Gun chapter 12 . 9/2/2013
Nice... Love it
just.a.tad.crazy chapter 12 . 1/27/2011
Amazing story! Wish that we could get an update!
lilo chapter 12 . 5/12/2009
what happens now
Nothing is What it Seems chapter 12 . 7/2/2008
This is a really awsome story, I wish you update it.
Elena Rosemary chapter 12 . 7/12/2007
Shit...don't stop these chapters. I love them and Lucius! Well writt :)
san01 chapter 12 . 3/28/2006
xXx Zanzie xXx chapter 12 . 11/18/2005
omg i love it

its got a really great story line

and its different from other fics..

plz continue

Eternal Zanzie _
Smenzer chapter 12 . 10/30/2005
I really hope you're going to continue this story. For a few months I couldn't get online because the heat really messed up my computer but I'm back online now. I was thinking about this story and was wondering what new chapters might have been up... Its really interesting and mysterious! I enjoyed reading the new one. So was the letter really from Draco? Or was it something else? Where did Lucius take Hermoine? You will write more, won't you? I hope so!
Merlana chapter 12 . 9/1/2005

i have a few suggestions for you. Proofread, proofread, proofread. I noticed how one of your reviewers pointed out how your tenses are sometimes wrong, but you also make up words and sometimes your sentences get tangled. If you can't proof this yourself (i know how that is, i can't do my own stories either, i never catch teh mistakes), get someone to do it...there are always people willing to beta a fic. if you need/want a beta, send me an email,

Otherwise, this story has serious potential...i love the idea...keep it up

sugar n spice 522 chapter 12 . 8/20/2005
wouldnt there be spells preventing him from escaping? hm...well it was good, kind of confusing at the end but sure. i can't wait to see what's coming now
hotskittles chapter 12 . 8/7/2005 very confused now...update~
HeraBates chapter 12 . 8/4/2005
You have me very curious as to what was in that letter. I love that Severus and Lucius still have a friendship even if they are on opposing sides in the war.

Dumbledore would have lost anyone's trust had he done what he did to Hermione.
SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 12 . 8/4/2005
It's really good so far. Now, please update soon.
JerseySaint19 chapter 12 . 8/4/2005
Awesome chapter!
SteeleRanger chapter 12 . 8/4/2005
Curse cliffhangers! Update again soon!
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