|Reviews for Kiss|
| WR'sGirl chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
I do like that Kennedy was so gentle with Willow's pain and that they are happy in the fanfiction. The grammar and spelling kind of roughed me up though. "I'm defiantly not sorry we kissed" would mean she wanted to be sorry, but she just could not bring herself to. I also am not sure why you underlined the whole thing. On the plus side, the plot was good enough for me to stick around and I really enjoyed that. This is also ten years old and I will assume you have improved on the points I pointed out already.
| strange1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
that didn't drag on. that was totally sweet! i like the little details. very nice indeed.