Reviews for Red Lines
Luc Star chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
woah.. well written. man... this story is deep. i would say i almost cried when i read it, but then again i could say its 3 am in the morning here and i'm yawning so much my eyes are watering. i'm not sure actually. but yeah.. loving the stories about Steph and her life at the institute. you really know how to make a reader care about one of your creations. well, great writing... keep it up.
giveGodtheglory chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
woah
kay x mac chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
whoa...that was...just wow...eh i guess i have mixed feelings...i like the lyrics every once in a while...not as good as some of your other stuff but ok
Chaotic Jinx chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Woaw, just... woaw, to good. Woaw, i didnt realise that Steph was so dark, but then aagin i can understand n e mutant being like that. *sniffs* i'm kinda glad that mutants arnt real 4 the exact reson that they would have such a hard time.

Ok, just babberling now so b4n!

~chaotic jinx
Jinxeh chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Wow...that's kind of sad. Then again, it's not like I havent written about one of the students harming themselves before. So...meh. Mixed feelings.
athenethegoddess chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Oh. That's sad. Good beginning, leaves you wondering. but it's still sad. Getting better soon?
Volaticus chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
o_O Wow... is that it or are you gonna post more? Well, this was very interesting.