Reviews for His and Her Fairy Tale
rockdogravi chapter 3 . 5/19/2007
Aw! That's so cute! I love it!

Sequel...please?

KK
Skygate chapter 10 . 4/5/2007
Bravo my friend, it's really a shame that you lost interest half through but nonetheless it was absoloutley wonderfull im probably the biggest naruhina looser out there and your story was truly magnificent
Skygate chapter 6 . 4/5/2007
no! poor hinata, dont you just love her. oh man it would be so great if naruto opened up a tottal can of kick ass on hinata's father (overlooking of course the fact that naruto's like 17 and hiashi is a seasoned ninja with a kekai gankai)
Skygate chapter 5 . 4/5/2007
aw aside from that last scentence, that was tottaly the cutest chapter ive ever read
Skygate chapter 4 . 4/5/2007
cute, i liked the whole hanabi hero thing, i really like your writing and now i see how many stories you've authored, you're a regular veteran. conagrats!
Skygate chapter 3 . 4/5/2007
great chapter kinda dull though, but you seem to have captured the esscence of naruto pretty well
Skygate chapter 2 . 4/5/2007
Your writing is unorthadox to say the least, but i find it absoloutley brilliant, keep writting this story is fantastic...oh, wait im supposed to offer constructive criticism, er, well i'd say work on your tenses (you know past present and future tense) they seem to be a little jumbled. but really other than that this chapter was wonderfull
Yumi chapter 10 . 3/11/2007
Aw... How cute... and Hanabi is awesome in this! It's cute how she's just 'that's how sister's act, isn't it?'. This is so great! *Goes to read your Shika/Ino and Sasu/Saku fics*
Aisu Kurohoshi chapter 10 . 2/16/2007
The most awesome Naruhina fanfic I've ever read!
Skygate chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
well we must say, we enjoyed your first chapter and the intro

(about the first time they met) was great writing, its good to see a writer that isn't afraid to use fairly advanced vocabulary, we will definatley said you to our c2, the second part of this chapter was a little awkward but content wise, great
harmony cahill chapter 10 . 1/2/2007
so cool...
harmony cahill chapter 9 . 1/2/2007
introducing[drumroll begins]the greatest ninja-related story person of all time...WATS-YA-NAME!
harmony cahill chapter 8 . 1/2/2007
brilliant![true power of the kyubi, i like that...]
harmony cahill chapter 7 . 1/2/2007
COOL!how do you come up with suff?"cough,cough"fight scene"cough"
harmony cahill chapter 6 . 1/2/2007
bloody beautiful, mate!
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