Reviews for Squidward's Secret
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15
This is my new favorite fan fic. Not gonna lie i read this everyday. Good work.
Luka Spicy chapter 1 . 4/15
that was a very hot and spicy fanfic that made my penis very erect
person chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
urm very cra cra
DEAD ASS chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
SUCC
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2017
This is the best fanfiction doth mine eyes ever la...

It was fricking gud.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
The story line was full of plot holes. I didn't quite know where it was going at first. Then it became super obvious where it was going and I felt it became way too predicable. A few lines could be easily taken out of context as a very sexual situation which wouldn't be appropriate for the children who would be reading this. It is also rought with adult themes such as infidelity, male impotence and the strain of relationships in an adult work place. Artistically this story has nothing to offer. No analysis can be made from any critical thinking lenses. The story did not follow the true heroes journey and it felt more like a personal narrative and not a fully developed story. This story made me cum in 8 different languages. 9/11 would smash squidwards limp tenticles any day of the week
Laya chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
AMAZING! More drama next time please. Xoxo gossip gurl
xXDankM3M3SXx chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
10/10 I cry ery tim
mrs tom felton chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
I liked it. It was very clever and the grammar and spelling was near enough perfect. Just one question though... It's impossible for laura to have had 6 children in three years unless mermaid pregancy is shorter than humans. Sorry to nit-pick. Like it alot! :D
Sunset-Highway River-Jungle chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
So there actually was a woman. I thought that there was going to be a twist to the story and it would turn out to be Spongebob instead lol.
yellowhearts chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
urm... nice story... bit weird tho...
Kapeesh1214 chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Weird and pointless.

I like it.

-Am Kapeesh
Magic Owl chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
uh, whats the point?
Joshua W chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
That was a great story and It was really tied together. keep up the good work
kittyluvr chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
Hiya! I just read your story entitled 'Squidward's Secret' and I thoughruly enjoyed it. I absolutely love Spongebob Squarepants and I could totally imagine your story as one of the episodes.

I think that it was very clever to use Squidward's baldness and Mr Krab's whale daughter connected in the story and if you write any more stories I am sure to read them!

Thanks :)
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