|Reviews for Easy Smile|
| Measured chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
I usually have a strong dislike of first person fics, but somehow this worked very well in capturing their emotions ~ it was really cute I hope you write more for this couple, it's rarer than it should be ;;~!
(Ivan's phrase in the vs. mode is what convinced me of the ship. lesse, if I remember correctly it was "I'll go anywhere Isaac goes." )
| McGwee chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
You are the queen of golden sun shonen-ai fluff. Write more o great one!
| magical-flyingdragon chapter 1 . 10/14/2004
heh..cute..anything abut Ivan is cute i love him... cutey cutey cute..*dances*
| deityofsorrow 2lazy2login chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Okay, since my e-mail hates yours, I'm doing it this way. .
Anyways, how would you like me to write you your very own birthday fic? Just for you? E-mail back, temm yea or nay, or toss it onto the 'lost minds' box. Anyways, I hope you'll say yes. I've got a great idea.
In relation to this fic, it's good. Love your work, keep it going.
| Cami of Queenscove chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
Hehehe... that was so cute! I loved it... I really only read it b/c you wrote it, but er... w/e. I was happily surprised. I don't usually go for anything with Ivan (he always struck me as sorta boring) but this was cute. CUTE! Hehe.
And the Felix tying Piers down the bed imagery...
| Mr. Peabody Hawke chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Excellent! That was so cute! You write the most amazing GS shounen-ai, Azusasan. I'm not even big on this pairing... or, well... I wasn't until I read this. _ I might just have to go find more now! I loved the inner monologues, especially Isaac's. You do wonders with his personality, m'dear, and that's hard since he barely has much of one in the game.
You really have a way with closures- and opening hooks, for that matter. Both your introductory and ending lines were perfect. "- another experiment couldn't hurt," rounds the whole thing off *perfectly*!
And I'm pretty sure you got all the tenses right. I didn't notice any mistakes while I was reading it, and I'm usually pretty sensitive to those things. ::crooked grin:: Keep writing! ~.
| reviewer chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
yay!that was enjoyable...write more!
| Anomalous One chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
*squeal!* So cute! I love the plot, and the characters are very un-ooc. (I think I just made up a word...) Darn it, now I'm starting to Luv This Pairing To Death.
| Avari wind seer chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Actually, the present tense actually seemed to work in this fic. I liked it! Isaac and Ivan weren't all lovey-dovey and such...
Anyway, it was cute.
| Akiko Date chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Hi, it's me, Akiko! _; Anywho, I think it was cute, and I'm weird in the fact that I love reading stuff in first person-present tense.
Anyway, yeah. Good stuff.
| Bandersnatch202 chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
WEHH! I LIKE! You did a very good job with this fic, the personalities came out perfectly, and I LOVE that mental image hehe, felix tying pers down to the bed _! Although I'm more a fan of Garet/Ivan and Felix/Sheba, this was good, I liked it very much. You are definitely a good author and I'm going to go see if you have any other fics right now! Ta!
PS - PLEASE! Write a sequal to this!
Though you don't have to and it wouldn't be needed, I just would like to see more of this story, it was a little short _