Reviews for Hug it Out!
AP.Violin chapter 28 . 7/17
It started great, a,d I loved the interaction between Severus and Hermione, but the ending was severely rushed, unexplained, plotless, unresolved and well..disappointing, especially after such great first chapters.
billy bob chapter 28 . 7/4
the whole story sucked. i dont know why i read the whole thing. go back to your original fandom you cow
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 28 . 4/22
Vampire88855 chapter 1 . 3/7
I have read the full fanfiction which is rare in case of me. :)
Guest chapter 28 . 10/16/2014
wel helo ther chapter 28 . 8/29/2014
I loved it! Great job on the plot, and awesome way to end the story
Goose chapter 25 . 8/5/2014
Retarded story.
Guest chapter 28 . 7/26/2014
.ever.I didn't like it, but you did write it to fit your writing style, and it's your story, so I can't really be too, good job...I guess?
MidnightGlows chapter 28 . 6/9/2014
The beginning was amazing, but the ending was hell. You didn't explain things well and I often got confused. Plus you made Harry die and Hermione barren!
Jennydownes3 chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
wow this is really good I have read up to chapter 19 so far and it was really good will comment again when finished but this is a real good writing xxx
Honest Abe chapter 28 . 12/31/2013
YOUR STORY SUCKS. I read reviews before i read a story, and your ending was rushed, horrible, and completely ruined your fanfic.
ssf chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Um... did Hermione bathe - or at least cast a cleaning charm on herself - before she got dressed for the day? It interrupts the flow of the story when a reader has to pause to wonder about the main character's hygiene.
Amanda L chapter 28 . 6/1/2013
I really enjoyed this story. I don't particularly like the Marriage Law fanfictions, but i enjoyed this one because it had a very good story plot that still included Voldemort. There were a few spelling/capitalization errors but overall I really liked this story.
Melissa72 chapter 28 . 5/24/2012
I thought the story was rather good...don't beat yourself probably would cringe at any attempt I would make at writing:)

I can see by the epilogue that you decided to shut things down quickly and not explain what happened in the final battle...but that's ok...I'm just glad Severus asked her to marry him:)

Thank you for sharing the gift God gave you for writing.
AreYouSirius-questionmark chapter 3 . 5/10/2011
Jane austen? :D:D
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