|Reviews for Alternate Reality|
| Slyph chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
This story is so beautiful..I can just picture them in the ocean,their fingers entwined...What a beautiful thought. Don't ever stop writing, your a beautiful author.
| Akhushtal chapter 1 . 9/8/2004
That was beautiful. A dreamy, enchanting beauty. You expressed their love for each other very lucidly. If their love were tangible, it would be like the finest flowing silk.