Reviews for Fathers and Daughters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. And I would love to have seen Jim's reaction to meeting Cass with Babs. I can just imagine Cass just grinning with Jim's thoughts run wild! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet |
![]() ![]() Always nice to see an introspective on people like Gordon, decent people without any of the super part and how they deal with those people and the impact they have on their lives. Thank you for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Impressive; you really got the characterization down well. Two thumbs up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really sweet. :D And Jim's neighbor was good comic relief. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story. Very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute. I like how they all just let each other pretend that they don't know about the other. I liked the way Jim always wakes up when he hears the sirens. This was really good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I tumbled to this through a circuitous route, by way of OH JOHN RINGO NO. Seems like you're a good writer whatever it is you put your hand to. I look forward to reading more of your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! Very well written, I enjoyed this. I liked your voice for the Commissioner. KrisEleven~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what Filby really thinks. Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading Gordon's thoughts and reflections on life and relationships. He's a great character, and I'm very glad you are writing about him. Thank you for the wonderful, nostalgic read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Very nice! And I loved Filby :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. |