This is great! Really loved the horror and the Lancelot is nice to little kids but the ending trumps everything

oh, that ending... *shivers*

I was shocked (shocked!) by your ending. and with Octavio having a 'special interest' in Lancelot...*shivers*. I wonder if the knights know the truth. Very creepy and very cute. The children were adorable. _Bye!

Great little piece. Excellent work. Vivid description, well-kept characters, and a chillingly good way of revealing how he really died at the end. Keep up the good work.

hey i thought that it was realy good i love how it makes you think one thing then it turns out to be some thing else

Fantastically done! I like the voice you give Lancelot in this story, and the children...

Nice. Very good ending. You've got a nice writing style. I suspected something of the truth while reading, but I like that Lancelot always changes the tale for the children. Cheers:)

Great story! I can definitely see Lancelot regaling the children with all those stories of his, not to mention him looking at those twin swords as they stuck on the ground!

Maybe you'll write another story where he tells another tale to the children?

Good Job!

A most excelent story! Very well written. I loved the idea of Lancelot telling that story to Bors' little bastards, and I could just see him sitting there with all the children crowded around him. I also love how Bors comforted the crying little children. Gilly is a cute little kid, made all the cuter by your story... Lancelot is also made all the more cuter by your story as well, lol. One of my favorite parts was the sword fight with Tristan, very funny, also very cute! What a twist at the end, didn't see that one coming! All in all a truely wonderful story! *Appauldes author*

Amanda

Am so glad that you've written another story!

I love it, and very much so too! Tastefully and creatively done. You had me smiling at the thought of picturing fearless knight Lancelot telling the children a story.

And bravo to Bors, who loves his 'little bastards' enough to keep them safe and comforted from the horrific ghost story. :D

That was brilliant. Talk about dark humor.

Ah! This is a wonderful story! I absolutly loved it! I'm a big, big fan of Lancelot, so anything concerning him that isn't slash with Arthur is a-o-k with me! But not only that, it's a wonderfully written and told story, and I throughly enjoyed reading it!

*~*Anissa*~* aka PhoenixFireWings aka Aislinn Pendragon aka Theaya Phoenix aka I have too many nickames

Ah, you are quite a good story teller. :3 Keep up the good work!

Now that was a twist at the end. Marvellous, the tale was interesting, language used suitable and very detailed descriptions. The twist really puts a darker hint to things.

wow, Lancelot really stretched the truth. lol.

good job! excellent fic, i loved it. :)