|Reviews for Morlin's Tale|
| Radon65 chapter 7 . 10/13/2007
What a mess! Another plot-moving chapter.
| Radon65 chapter 6 . 10/13/2007
Apparently these caves are a lot worse than I thought... Creepy. Hopefully, McCoy and Turita can save the day! A very intriguing chapter.
| Radon65 chapter 5 . 10/13/2007
Hey, cool that Spock said something! Not a bad idea, either - talk about the other side of the planet. I am now very curious to see what Turita does. This is an interesting plot line.
| Radon65 chapter 4 . 10/13/2007
They want Morlin and Spock to spend a week in some caves! Augh! Not good... Turita is a pretty cool little boy. I'm assuming McCoy's going to show him his planet. I'd like to see his reaction.
| Radon65 chapter 3 . 10/13/2007
Hm. Morlin is a good character. She's well drawn and so is her brother. Interesting plot twist that they've beamed him up to the ship now.
| Radon65 chapter 2 . 10/13/2007
Uh oh! Boy, it didn't take long for that to go sour! Yipe. Cool that McCoy's going to head down if they resort to that. A very plot-moving chapter.
| Radon65 chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Interesting beginning. I really like the way that you did this like an episode, even adding in the opening - I just finished humming the music to accompany it. I'm curious as to why Spock is going to this planet and I'm quite intrigued to see where this goes.
| Bingalicious Midnight chapter 8 . 10/10/2004
Hey, the end. That was surprising...it didn't end how I expected... well, great story. Keep writing.
| Bingalicious Midnight chapter 7 . 10/2/2004
Mwahahahahaha. I agree. Hmm, the aukrawn doesn't seem too pleasant... especially not in the forementioned hole. Is forementioned even a word? Oh well. It's late so my brain isn't exactly functioning. Anyway, I still love this story and I can't see where it goes. And what's up with Turita? Well, you'll have to post for me to find out. I'm rambling now so I'll leave it at - - keep writing.
| Bingalicious Midnight chapter 6 . 9/23/2004
Very close to molasses, though. The thickness, I mean. A hole in the ground with a rock over it? Never very comfortable. Hmm well.
Update soon. Please?
| jd burns chapter 5 . 9/20/2004
Ooh...to parrot another reviewer, the plot *is* thickening. You're going to continue this soon, right?
| jd burns chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Still reading, but wow! This sounds really interesting!
| Bingalicious Midnight chapter 5 . 9/15/2004
The plot thickens... I thinik... thinik. that's a new word. Anyway, still love this story. Keep writing it, and keep posting of course. :) Uh... ran out of things to say in review...
| Lady Chekov chapter 2 . 9/5/2004
Ah, I like where this is going...
Once again, nice last lines!
| Bug Vulcan of Central Perk chapter 4 . 9/3/2004
Interesting... I like the whole 'poison' conversation. Uh... keep writing... still can't wait for the next chapter... (btw, sorry if my reviews get repetitive...)
Oh yeah. By dividers I just meant something like