| Reviews for The Eternal Saga Of Lost Spirits |
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  Alexander Williams chapter 5 . 4/7/2006 Keitaro's sister is named KANAKO not kakano. but otherwise good story please write more chapters. |
 deleted456 chapter 8 . 9/17/2005 Are you going to write a new chapter or what? We've been waiting for god damn months! |
| Naoki09 chapter 1 . 7/16/2005 keep going... but can you ditch the honorifics? They dont make sense. Almost any anime fan will understand what they mean, but some people arnt obsessed. Some people dont know what "Hai" or "Goman" means. so i would just use english words in this english story. |
| i'm going to kick your ass chapter 8 . 6/10/2005 nice updatate soon |
| xeno chapter 8 . 5/23/2005 this really is an interesting story,I enjoyed it alot,if could please update soon,I think this is really good. |
| Dimitri Plabato of The Dark Icon Writers chapter 8 . 5/8/2005 Okay here's my review. First off this is the first Keitaro/Shinobu fic i've ever read and enjoyed; I just really don't like the paring but this one works. I really like it and the feel especially since Keitaro just basically got the one end deal of the Ranma 1/2 complex. It's a nice change and I can't wait for chapter 9. |
| Dimitri Plabato of The Dark Icon Writers chapter 4 . 5/8/2005 Oh SHIZNICH! “Sorry about that. But you really got to stop being aroused to easily, Keitaro.”? OMG! LOL! ROTFLLAMMOC! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'll give a review when I finish up lol! |
| Patamon1224 chapter 4 . 4/1/2005 Hey Heres the Down side(s) to your Fic: Grammer need work Players seem out of charater The Plot seems to Scream"I'm a horny 14 year old boy that reads the manga and likes Shinobu!" (No offence!) Dialoge is half-baked and a little corny Sometimes a person who throws in the japense words with an english Fan Fic is just trying to show off My Advice: Proof read your work 3 or 4 times before you submit it. Work hard on keeping the charaters true to there personalitys. Other than that I have No problem, Spelling does'nt bother me. I can see a LOT a comidic potional in the story though! PEACE |
| DCWestby chapter 7 . 12/7/2004 Certainly... interesting.. Well written.. Keep it up... wouldnt mind Ninamouri to get her own body tho... |
| RonSa chapter 7 . 11/5/2004 Tottaly freaky, I love it! please add no soon! I have to know more! |
| Locke Watcher formly of this site chapter 7 . 11/1/2004 Q: Does this take place at the end of the manga? A: No. Reason: You said that this takes place before manga #9. Why did I ask, Kanako is here and the next question. Q: How old is Shinobu? R for Q: If I remember correctly, you have to been at least 16 to marry in Japan (inless you have special government 'permission'). Mostly I want my second question answered. Good fic so far. |
| ranger5 chapter 7 . 10/31/2004 Wel, lots going on, and many questions. Is he gonna marry Shinobu ... will Kanako be his mistress. Well she even want to now that he's a girl. Good job with the story and keeping us guessing. |
| Blitz329 chapter 7 . 10/30/2004 SO FUNNY MAN. i love this story. |
| Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 10/11/2004 Not bad... You could have gone a little more in depth into WHY a spirit might take Keitaro, but hey, it's your fic. Naru was kind of OOC here, but okay considering the circumstances. |
| story helper anonymized for your protection chapter 6 . 10/5/2004 Interesting story, so let me get this straight, the story is like a mix between spirits, Love Hina, and Ranma 1/2 right? Except that the boy cannot change back. Well, nicely written until the last part where Kanako goes crazy, she sounds stupid in my opinion so you need a better evil rant. (It's creepy how she loves her brother, but then it's kinda kinky) |