Reviews for The Paradox of Balance
DebiruFlonne chapter 5 . 4/7/2006
Wow... REALLY good story. I have no idea where it's going. That's pretty impressive. Keep it up!
Happy Mask Salesgirl chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Dude, Taiga, Hermes is one of my favorite Pucelle characters, and you wrote him awesomely! Are you going to continue this one at some point?
Teefa and Co chapter 5 . 1/29/2005
Teefa: Wow! I wonder what's going on.

Rutee: Could it be Calamaty's power? If so, they're in real trouble. Or could their enemies have laid a trap?

Lufia: Hope Croix has enough sense to avoid Prier for the time being. She needs time to cool off.
Blaze1662001 chapter 5 . 12/8/2004
wow what a great chapter you had me worried that Croix actually did it because he wanted to kill her but I'm glad thats cleared up have a happy holidays
Bella chapter 5 . 12/7/2004
I knew there was a logical explanation for Prier getting shot! I do feel sorry for Croix, though _;

Good luck with your exams and Happy Holidays to you!
Kelli chapter 4 . 12/4/2004
Great fanfic! It's really good so update real soon.*evil gale* or else... *back to normal self* just kidding! _
Bella chapter 4 . 11/3/2004
*stares at you*

I wouldn't say you've signed your death wish...yet. If you don't update this soon, you might, though! ;)

I have you say, you've really got a talent for cliffhanger endings! And I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who thought Culotte got the short end of the stick. Granted Alouette didn't feel the same way about him, but still, he's gone through more emotional trauma than anyone that young should have to. So props to you for writing him so accurately! _

Update soon, or...umm...I'll torture you with scary La Pucelle doujinshis! _
Blaze1662001 chapter 4 . 11/2/2004
wow who would have thought that Croix would shoot Prier unless he doesn't know it's her either way this chapters awesome
Bella chapter 3 . 10/20/2004
I enjoyed reading that, and the fight scene was perfect-not too long and not too short. I was disappointed the chapter was over so soon! And it *is* hard coming up with names in the La Pucelle universe, I almost named one of my characters Soutien-gorge. _;;
Blaze1662001 chapter 3 . 10/19/2004
I really enjoy reading this story please don't stop writing it
Blaze1662001 chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
wow this story is really good I would really like it if you could update it again
Mid-Boss chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Kamaro:interesting...I was starting to get desperate that no one would write any La pucelle fics anymore...whoa...light doesn't exactly mean good anymore...oh how nice it is to be evil...ehehehe...and can I have one of your muses?Some...of my vassals


kamaro:okay...all of my vassals ran away after I planned to put them in one of my romance type fics...poor me...boohoo...

Fianna:u still got me.