] i just wanted to say: that was a really cute ending sque~

*snif* can't believe that it's over now...

thank you for sharing your story with us!

i'm anxious to read the sequels? (will we ever know who the father of the child is? will sakura really marry sasuke...)

Hey, sorry that that other dude ticked you off so much, but you gotta admit that he did seem to be pretty stupid to just keep reviewing just to tell you how much he hated it! What a dumass.

Anyways, I hope you make a sequel! Maybe write about Sakura's new baby and who it belongs to. I think both Sasuke and Naruto could play fatherly rolls in raising it(he or a she?). I think it belongs to Naruto, but I kinda hope it's Sasuke's so he can start to rebuild the Uchiha clan. Either way, it's your choice and I'll support you in whatever you choose.

Later._

-18

The sequals better come soon . . . . I am such an impatient person when I come across such a good story and am left HANGING! This story is a piece of heaven for me, for whatever odd reason and you can bet that I'll remember this story as I mature through life, even if I outgrow Naruto . . gods forbid . . . 0_o

*dances in glee* Sequesl*s*? That makes me so happy! XD I'm glad to see there's gonna be more fics in the 'Teamwork' universe - heaven knows there's a lot of potential, :p You're an absolute genius to make up such a good plot - go, you!

And lol, I kinda enjoyed that rant of yours - some people never learn, do they? *giggles*

Anyways, the fic was an absolutely awesome read... and the epilogue was particularly satisfying. Keep writing! :-)

*insert huge fangirl squee*

omg. it's done. omg, whee! now i'm all happy...ehehehee...i stilove the way you took this, where it went and how it got there-all the interaction, the affection that they don't express (cuz they don't need to) and everything. yeah. it's one of my fave fics...and sequels? kick ASS! XD

Ya know, I don't read Yaoi, 3-somes or the like that much but I REALLY enjoyed your story. It was very well written, the characters stayed true to their personalities from the manga (basically). It was a sweet story as well. I've seen some of the other reviews and, even if i had "flamed" you, you shouldn't listen too much, it's your story and if this is how you wanted it, then it's not our (the readers) place to question what you, the writers wants.

Besides, it came out good in the end. keep it up! Ja! _

I'm really happy you finished this. It's been a fun thing to read.

Let me first of all say that personally I dislike threesome fics on principle, because so many of them are done badly. You have just restored my faith that they can be well written, and without using lemons to keep the audience interested, no less! The relationship really did feel like it involved all three of team seven, as opposed to a couple and a tagalong found in so many fics.

I also applaud your characterisation. Sakura isn't reduced to some snivelling brat (which happens all to often in fics) and Sasuke hasn't mysteriously reformed into a perfect gentleman because of a little 'love'. (Another common fault in characterisation. I have a bad tendancy to do this one.)

Critism-wise, there's very little wrong with your speech and description of location, but I personally found your writing of them running out of Konoha confusing. You might want to try slowing down and describing more carefully an action intense scene the next time you choose to write one.

All in all, this is a fic I am very happy to leave on my favourites list to re-read from time to time. Thank you for writing it.

Ohh, I can't wait for the sequels.

Yay! Happy endings!

I normally don't like Sakura much but i really enjoyed her in this fic. She seemed strong somehow, not strong in a physical sense but mentally and emotionally, and i liked that.

Sasuke finally acknowledging her is long overdue in the entire fanfiction world and it seems very natural since after all, the simplest things are the things that change who we are.

Overall, Your story is beautiful. It has certainly changed my preceptions of the characters and that, i thank you for.

humm... well I like how yo uwent about writing the ending.

YES, YES, YES! Sequels galore!

There were only a few points within the story where I kinda went "Oh, that probably needs a comma" or "meeps, that didn't flow as smoothley as the rest of it" but I can't remember any of them right now, and quite frankly, then warmth of the Epilouge was just so tangible that it didn't make it as noticable as it could have been.

Lovely work.

How Cute!

I'm not ussually a fan of yaoi, im ussually a het fan, but, you made it work out!

Maybe make a sequel? What happened after that, and who is the father of Sakura's child, you knoe!

Well, jus a suggestion!

till next time!

Yay! Sequels! Lol, does Naruto trigger Sasuke's traps? That WOULD be funny... Yesh, anyways, awesome fic! I'll definitely be reading the sequel!