Reviews for Teamwork
insanelynormal chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
Wow. Such an interesting fic...
Mama Turtleduck chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
I love this fic! These guys are my absolute fav... umm... would you call it a pairing? I dunno, but they're the best together. I'm excited to see what's going to happen with the baby and stuff. If it was to get aborted I would cry so hard. You've written this so well I feel like I'm just as excited as them!
Riana1 chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
You out did yourself with this chapter- all the reasons and hopes and dreams that SakuSasuNaru embodies for me. They find themselves and their place in each other; what is missing or wounded or hurt in themselves can be found in each other.

It...

It just...

It justs works.

The line "Apart from their presence, he could think of nothing he really needed" sums it up the best: all they need is each other and that is all they could want.

*blows kisses and huggles*

Placing this review in every forum)
dbzneon chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
I had kind of given up on this story a while ago, but this chapter was a big surprise. it's great to see that the three could live together happily. I always figured Suske and Naruto but i was happy to see Sakura warming up to the idea of being with NAruto. Keep this tory gogin and update soon. And is their ANY chance you might write a lemon for this, because the story is so perfect for one.
Sintari chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
*busy, busy* But I had to read!

Quick review:

Kyuubi was "Grawarrhh!" hot.

I almost melted when Team 7 sat around and talked about future plans. And my heart went out to Naruto whenever he bravely tried to bring Sasuke and Sakura together. I know Sasuke resassured him, but I wish he would come out and reassure him a little more openly. The whole "Who would you shag?" conversation was priceless as well. Poor Neji. :(

Sorry for the short review! Update soon!
Tsugath chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
Wow, just wow. I would have never thought of THAT as a story line, but it's definitly not bad. Hope you keep this up to the end!
Raj-chan chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
I love this story! You're writing style is wonderful and the story is dark, but so touching. I can not wait till the next chapter!
Sukigoken chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
AW!

That was so cute- the end was anyways. _ I really enjoyed this chapter. I mean REALLY enjoyed it! I usually try to avoid yaoi, but you know what? Fuck it. THIS ROCKS! I love the plot, the- EVERYTHING! Seriously, it can't get better than this.

And your writing style... Aw! It's brilliant! So descitptive, so deep. I can really picture what's going on. You have perfect grammer, wonderful format, and what's rarer than bohth of those? You keep everyone in character!

Brilliant.

Needless to say, I sincerely look forward to the next update, which I'm hoping is soon! I'm not pressuring you though; just encouraging.

Keep up the marvelous work!
scorpion05 chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
they're right... it could be sasukes child... but what was kyuubi talking about? (it' doesn't matter whose body fathers him!) - don't really understand this...

i love them toghether. all there love/passion for each other! great!
DeeDee chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
Wow...that's the only word I can think of to describe this! And beautiful as fics go...and it has a wondeful style and I love the relationship between the three! It's...wow.
cfox chapter 2 . 11/6/2004
A good threesome. It is acutually belivelable.

I like your take it is mature and not childish.

Your style of writing is familar have you ever written in Gundam Wing? I hope you contunue this story.
viviannnnn chapter 5 . 11/6/2004
oh man...thatw as such a great chapter. I love their relationship together!
MegaMaz chapter 5 . 11/5/2004
The wait was worth it. For what you're writing, I'm surprised you got it out as fast. All the psychological and logical stuff. The reprecussions and the reactions to keep everyone as in character as can be in the situation.

And poor Sasuke feels left out, I think. Now to see how everyone else handles their resolve. Anko will be pissed. Kakashi . . eh . . that's up in the air right now.

. . . And they better not put Sakura in quarantine! I assume she's going to have the child . . .
Malitia chapter 5 . 11/5/2004
AWE!1 that was a hella long chapter... i love how they all wanna do it together.. its so sweet. i loved it ! update sooN! or i'll kill!... ahemm... abayo!

malitia
dead.uzumaki chapter 5 . 11/5/2004
OMG i was gonna cry and laugh! that was a very sad and happy chapter! too bad kyubi didn't realli jump sasuke! j/k...(yes i'm a sasunaru fangirl) well i wonder how life for the 3 will turnout? i wonder how everyone will reat when they go back? well good chapter! please update again sooN!
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