| Reviews for Teamwork |
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  Ifuriita chapter 4 . 11/3/2004 It's amazingly entertaining I love it. NaruSasuSaku is my favourite threesome too and, OMG, it's really well written.. Can't wait to see the next chap! |
 Kanemoshi chapter 4 . 11/1/2004 o... I like...hmm...you totally have to write more! who woulda thought...Sasuke/Naruto/Sakura... |
| Miss Ribbit chapter 4 . 10/30/2004 OMG. i love this story! I wasnt sure at first, since im strickly a SasukSaku fan... Anyway... My best friend found this and HAD to read it. First chapterSUPER funny. it tickled my funny bone. Ever since ive been totally hooked. You have planned it very well, right down to the last detail! (eg: I thought you had forgotten about Abortion, but no)! lol Super premium! I cant wait to read more! you know all the little boxes below when you submit a review, they're all checked off! :) Love MR |
| applesandtea chapter 4 . 10/24/2004 omgsh. so good! poor naruto... |
| Naomi Richards chapter 4 . 10/23/2004 Oi I love Your stories! Your the Best! *glomps* please keep up all the writing you've been doing! love you! Naomi |
| EfrainMan chapter 4 . 10/23/2004 Very tense and angsty. I realy like and hope more comes soon :) |
| schyra chapter 4 . 10/23/2004 YES! I -love- this chapter! The personalizations are nice, really nice! Especially the quiet, tired-streak of Sasuke. Oh, and "will you stop howling, you bloody sack of fur?" is the greatest insult naruto has ever thought up. XD |
| MegaMaz chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 Now this . . is getting interesting . . (excuse the lack of vocabulary and commentary. I'm still digesting imformation and situation. And after that, I'll contemplate all possible scenarios and promptly faint from exhaustion caused by many sleepless nights) . . update soon. I want my sleep . . . |
| Kyuubi no Youko chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 I must know what happens. Keep writing, this interests me. |
| Melissa chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 Hey, I just wanted to say that I love your story and I can't wait until you update again. I love the whole concept of Sasuke and Sakura being Naruto's mates. I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Great job on the story and just know that I'm anxiously waiting for the next part. |
| Sukigoken chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 Brilliant, as usual! Seriously, you're a fucking genious! Pardon my language... Beautiful, BEAUTIFUL sentence structure, you've been aweseom in keeping them in character- all of them. I can't wait until you post the next chapter! Keep up the great work! |
| dbzneon chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 Sogood, but update way faster,and keep it in Naruto;s perspective! |
| dead.uzumaki chapter 4 . 10/22/2004 WOW! omg that was intense...i hope that things are okay...T_T poor sakura and naruto! please update again soon! |
| icemint chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 Right after Naruto snarled, "No way in hell.." I got the creeps. I saw him going so angry, it was scary. Please update soon! |
| NaturalCyber chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 I'm impressed. This is the most interesting plot I've come across in a long, long while! Keep writing! I want to see what comes of this. I'll put you on my favorites even! |