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   Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 Yikes... Sounds like Naruto has a little repressing to do. Damn Kyuubi. Interesting characterization of the Nine-Tails, though. . Poor Sakura... She never did react well to personally stressful situations. Adn Sasuke's not saying anything... I'd really like to know what his thoughts on all this is. Guess I just have to wait until the next part, heh? . *camps* |
| Sintari chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 Hooray for Chapter 4! I was so excited when I saw the title, because I was afraid you might pull back and get into the heads of Tsunade or Kakashi, etc. But no, cut right to the heart of the matter. First, I love Kyuubi. I have no personal experience with fox demons, but if I were to venture a guess, I'd say your characterization is dead on. As for the moral dilemma with the baby, what a tough choice. I really feel for Naruto, because he does want the baby. On the other hand, Sakura shouldn't have to pay for one night with the rest of her life. I love how you're addressing such a controversial issue and I can't wait to find out what happens!*holds out hand for Chapter 5* |
| viviannnnn chapter 4 . 10/21/2004 I seriously think Sakura is stupid in here. She loves him she keeps him whether the Kyuubi transfer whatever of his over to the baby or not. Abortion is gahh...SAKURA! DON'T MAKE THE WRONG CHOICE. I feel bad for Naruto...he really loves Sakura. Stupid Sasuke -_- he can bea bit more helpful. I think this story is WONDERFUL. "you bloody sack of fur?" « that line is HILARIOUS. |
| Yuen-chan chapter 3 . 10/20/2004 Good for you. Stick to what you like. |
| The Spatula Chick chapter 3 . 10/17/2004 Confusing and a bit ooc. But not too terribly much. Not bad, really. |
| The Spatula Chick chapter 2 . 10/17/2004 Interesting, in a very demented sort of way. |
| icemint chapter 3 . 10/16/2004 All this drama over sex...I love it XDD! Chp 1 was my favourite. This is interesting Please update soon! |
| Faery chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 I am really enjoying your fic so far. I love the anime Naruto, and the thought of this threesome always intrigued me. You are doing it very well. It's actually believable rather than porn without plot, which is wonderful. I do hope that there is some more romance at some point, but having a background for it to make it plausible is great. Keep going! |
| Sukigoken chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 *ish absolutely GLUED* On behalf of all three chapters of your positively BRILLIANT work of written artwork, I'd just like to pep you up a bit by saying... KEEP ON TRUCKIN'! Seriously, this is perhaps the BEST Naruto fic! It's got angst, romance, a PLOT! w00t! And even some comedy! I sincerely admire you, and hope you update soon! I'm looking foreward to it! |
| GemGemJoo chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 you already know what I feel about this. (RE: I LOVE IT!) |
| EfrainMan chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 This is a really good yarn, very intriguing. I really like the little bits of the Kyuubi in there (calling them his mates, cubs, etc.). Write more soon! :) |
| Kuarri chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 Omg... PLEASE UPDATE! Like now T_T I must know what happens *shakes* I absolutely love the plot to this story -! I beg u to update soon Ill give u a cookie... No Ill give a whole bag of cookies *continues to bribe for awhile* ... and so on and so forth Update soon Kuarri |
| JadeTiger chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 did i review this already? ohwell. Update soon! must know more NOW! |
| ChimeraDragon chapter 3 . 10/14/2004 Wow, I'd have to say that I'm really impressed with this story! You do awesome work and I can't wait to see more of this one and your others! |
| Gopu chapter 3 . 10/13/2004 Good story so far |