Reviews for Teamwork
MeLaiya chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
hey i really like this. Are you ever goin to update. Please do so a.s.a.p. This is really good.
coffup chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Ah... *sends you made lurve* Totally in lurve with this story... *wonders if it was a one-shot* *hopes not* . Lurve inner sakura, she's so funni. Toot, tooT. O.o but why did Naruto go sex crazy? O.o *wonders* quick, update! and i shall send you more mad lurve and bad grammar .

nishasha
Elyzchan chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
Hey! I LOVE your fic ! Tu es vraiment super douée pour les trio ! J'espère (comme tous tes lecteurs) revoir cette Team bientôt ... YOU'RE SO GREAT ! ASUKA-SAMA !BIG BIZ !

PS : Bravo pour les progrès en dessin de toute l'équipe de Version-SD !
trix chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
omg! that was good,n rilly funny
Mercedes no Inuarai chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
*happyhappyhappypur*

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I do so love your Naruto fics... Your characterization is pleasantly perfect.

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Neat idea. Instead of showing the act, whcih too many people do, you showed the aftermath, which too few people do. Somehow, that moment is all the more sweeter for the absence of the written act. All we need to know about it is said or implied, so all that's really important is the emotions. _

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Very highly enjoyable. Being a big fan of guyXgirlXguy threesomes, I must say, this is one of the best threesome fics I've read. Brava.

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And on that note, I need to get to bed. .;;
Mint chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
OMG! Please tell me "things are okay" translates to "we're going to continue banging each other silly until we're 90"! I LOVE the NaruSasuSaku pairing... err... combination! Team 7 rocks! And a dominant Naruto rocks even more! I'm usually a SasuSaku fan, but I still love NaruSasu. (And I'll take NaruSasu over SasuNaru or NaruHina ANY day!) The NaruSaku interactions in this fic are kinda cute and sweet too! Anyway, I hope I'll see more of your Team 7 fics in the future! :)
Stizzo chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
that was... that was... I need a beer.

nice job.
Sintari chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
I love it! I just got into this fandom and I can already tell I'm going to love a dominant Naruto. In my book, he can push Sasuke up against the wall any day of the week. You did a great job with Sakura, too. Inner Sakura's little snippets were a perfect contrast to Sakura's own humiliation. I hope you write more in this fandom & I plan to check out your GW stories as well!
bloodstain5 chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
wow that was really really good, ive never read anything like that really, and it was kinda confusing but still extremely good, and good job by the way. Keep up the great writing
httpq-a-m-orons.deviantart.com chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
. that was so touching. an incredible story. very orriginal.

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